Naruto Fanfic: Sakura Hidden from the World

The ending of the story is very sad, and the writing is okay, but many things are not explained clearly, such as: how she is related to Itachi, why the Akatsuki organization is willing to merge with the Eagle organization (although it may be because of Itachi, but I think Pain or Madara are the biggest, and why they agreed to be managed by the Eagle organization), and Naruto's collapse (gosh, how could he be so smart at that time). Although I don't understand many things, I still give you 2 points. I hope you will continue to work hard and correct your shortcomings, come on!

2333333 Boss boss

Prosperous, trance-like, awesome, awesome

In fact, if I were asked to choose someone to save between Shiro and Kimimaro, I would choose Kimimaro, because at least Shiro is happy, because the person he cherishes and cares about also cares about him. Kimimaro was different. He regarded Orochimaru as his lifelong pursuit and belief, but Orochimaru only used him as a tool. If I traveled through time, I would only prevent Shiro and Buza from dying and advise them to stay away from these annoying things in the world.

It feels like this is a weird Honkai Impact article

What to do? Seeing this Mary Sue makes me want to vomit after eating.

So sentimental, so poignant, I wish it had a better ending.

Although the writing is good (with novel ideas), most of the characters are broken, and there are a lot of people who strangely hate the heroine. Not to mention that the heroine is so powerful that no one wants to win over/use her, but they actually gathered several ninjas from major countries to kill her?! It's simply inexplicable. Also, the author did not explain clearly in many places. I hope the author can consider things more comprehensively, write the details more clearly, and understand the psychological turning point and personality of the characters well. Looking forward to your next work. P. S. I have tried my best to beautify the wording, hoping not to hurt the author's heart :)

Although the writing is good (with novel ideas), most of the characters are broken, and there are a lot of people who strangely hate the heroine. Not to mention that the heroine is so powerful that no one wants to win over/use her, but they actually gathered several ninjas from major countries to kill her?! It's simply inexplicable. Also, the author did not explain clearly in many places. I hope the author can consider things more comprehensively, write the details more clearly, and figure out the psychological turning point and personality of the characters well. Looking forward to your next work. P. S. I have tried my best to beautify the wording, hoping not to hurt the author's glassy heart.

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