· My next story is on my profile. See the blurb below.
■ Modern alternate universe, top; extensive original worldbuilding, no extra powers for the Alpha; one-on-one, both leads' first love.
■ An earnest younger Alpha who gets everything wrong on the first try but learns quickly and readily does better X a cool, aloof beauty who's outwardly fierce but secretly sweet, an abstinent Omega with a flirtatious streak and a powerful presence.
#Wife teaches me step by step how to hook a silly fish
#How can I be a silly fish if I mistook her for someone else?
#A cool, ruthless Omega trains herself to be a flirt so she can chase me
1.
Su Guan transmigrated into a scummy-Omega novel as the top protagonist, whose fate was supposed to be tragic.
In the original story, the protagonist was ruthlessly targeted by her fiancee.
The scummy Omega abused the original protagonist in every way, relying on her powerful family and high status. One accident after another followed, leaving the original protagonist with broken arms and legs...
Su Guan: Do I really have to marry this scummy Omega?
System: She's not scummy. The original protagonist just used the wrong approach. Please make the appropriate corrections, Host.
Su Guan: .
She accepted the original story's information overload with a shudder, while tremblingly chatting with her best friend.
The original protagonist was just a Beta who couldn't smell pheromones. Did she really deserve to be tortured so badly?
Suddenly, she heard the clink of prayer beads. Right after that, an intense, rich, and elegant pheromone scent flooded her nose.
Su Guan: ...?
2.
As it turned out, she wasn't a Beta. She was just sensitive to the scummy Omega's pheromones.
Through her own relentless efforts, she still risked her life to marry the scummy Omega.
But after they married, Su Guan somehow found herself living in a bed of roses. There were no more accidents leaving her with broken arms and legs, only:
A foreign, multifunctional yacht
A declaration of love on a commercial building's giant screen
An extravagant fireworks show that cost a fortune...
And they kept up with their conjugal duties, too.
She thought Gu Xiyu must have an ulterior motive. This had to be the scummy Omega's scheme. She wouldn't bend for money.
It was just free money, not a marking!
She decided to wait and see.
Gu Xiyu's heat arrived. Her hair was disheveled, her cheeks flushed, and a thin sheen of sweat covered her neck.
Su Guan cautiously brought her a suppressor, but the woman caught hold of her. Her lips parted, her voice suggestive:
"Don't you think... someone's better than a suppressor in this situation?"
Su Guan: !!!
This had to be another one of the scummy Omega's schemes!
She decided to wait and see.
Besides that, Gu Xiyu also sent her all kinds of pictures.
From every angle, of every body part.
Then, trying to cover it up, she'd say, "Sent that by mistake."
Su Guan: ...
Needs further observation.
While she was observing, the System suddenly displayed: [Conquest progress: 0].
Su Guan's eyes widened in shock. The money she'd gotten was real, but the conquest progress being zero was real, too.
Su Guan: ...
Could this also be one of the scummy Omega's schemes?
3.
Gu Xiyu had a secret. She wanted to hook a fish.
The fish seemed a little unusual...
But that was fine.
The fish was silly, and she'd teach her how to take the bait, step by step.
But later, the fish caught on and stopped waiting to see.
At a Gu family banquet, Su Guan saw an Omega acting meek and keeping her anger to herself. Looking closer, she realized the Omega looked about half like her wife.
Just then, the System let out a shrill alarm. "Host, why are you so far away from your conquest target?!"
Su Guan: Is it too late to start over?
#Wasn't I sensitive to the scummy Omega's pheromones?
#Hello, police? Someone's scamming me!
4.
Su Guan planned to run away.
But the entryway lights suddenly blazed on, and the Omega, who wasn't supposed to be home, came back.
The elegant pheromone scent drifted into Su Guan's nose. Restrained desire surged beneath the woman's sparkling, peach-blossom eyes.
"How long are you going to keep deceiving me? Your excuse about the suppressor has run its course!"
But Gu Xiyu brushed her teeth over Su Guan's ear.
"You never used to look at me.
She doesn't like you, but I do..."
Bonus scene:
One day, Su Guan accidentally saw Gu Xiyu's phone. The notes app had a draft message:
"Hey, I think you should know about your fiancee..."
It was dated the day they first met.
In the past, Su Guan would never have imagined that the decisive, cool, and proud CEO Gu would do something like this.
But now things were different.
The scent of pheromones mingled with the dampness in her hair and clung to Su Guan's nose.
"We've only been married for a little while, and you already like me less and your phone more?" The woman's voice was suggestive, her breath hot and ragged.
She had used far too many tricks to get her.
-- Upcoming Story Blurb --
Xue Qingrong transmigrated into a melodramatic story about an elite school for the nobility, becoming an utterly ordinary D-rank student at the academy. At the same time, she was bound to a "Load Save and Write Self-Insert Fic" System. With help from the comments section, Xue Qingrong, who had never written self-insert fic before, had to complete a perfect story and reach the final ending.
It was all right if she failed, because the System had left her a way out: she could load a save.
The kind commenters chose her dream girl: Chi Xuan, the school's one and only top student with an S+ rating, student council president, and an all-around star in ability, character, and looks.
Following the commenters' prompts, Xue Qingrong wrote furiously and acted it all out:
[On a rainy day, you and the student council president hold hands outside the shop and wait for the rain to stop.]
[By day, the president is an iceberg. Only you know she's a volcano at night. Beneath her white shirt, buttoned to the top, are the marks of last night's kisses.]
[The usually low-key president drives a luxury car into the school, wraps an arm around your waist, and kisses you deeply.]
Everyone played along, but every time, the completion rate was low.
After hitting a wall, Xue Qingrong decided to kick out the commenters and write on her own.
She was already a competent writer.
[The cold, abstinent student council president goes home and opens a livestream, saying seductive things to you and you alone...]
Still, she couldn't reach the perfect ending.
When the System questioned her, Xue Qingrong argued confidently: So what? Anyone can write it, and I can always load a save.
Seeing the explicit things she'd written next, the System hesitated: ...Are you sure you don't have a personal agenda, using the ability to load saves as an excuse to do whatever you want?
*
Chi Xuan had been acting strangely lately:
On rainy days, she'd stand alone under the covered walkway, her hand still held out as if holding someone's, but with no one beside her.
People found her alone in a car late at night, calmly straightening her clothes, with bright red lip marks clearly visible on her neck.
At night, she would watch over an empty livestream room, with several items of clothing scattered across her bed.
Of course, what Chi Xuan found most unbearable was that one second she had her arm around someone's waist, and the next, that person was gone.
She'd kissed empty air.
After being abandoned again and again, Chi Xuan finally couldn't take it anymore. She refused to keep playing along with Xue Qingrong.
She brought Xue Qingrong evidence of being abandoned dozens of times and demanded to know what she meant by it all.
Looking at the awful ending she'd lazily written last time, Xue Qingrong felt guilty, but still kissed Chi Xuan on the face. "I just wanted us to experience the most unforgettable love."
Then, two days later, while Chi Xuan wasn't paying attention, she ran away.
Chi Xuan: ...Just destroy the world.
*
That's right. Ever since Xue Qingrong kicked out the commenters, her story had started falling apart.
The reviewers ordered her to write a bad-ending story, or risk having it locked.
So Xue Qingrong finally saw the error of her ways and, with tears in her eyes, wrote a bad-ending story about herself and Chi Xuan. It began:
"My wife died, so I inherited her family's hundred-billion fortune and started spending, spending, spending."
Fashion shows today, nightclubs tomorrow.
The strangest thing was that this time, even though she hadn't loaded a save, just as she was showering money on a blonde beauty, a hand grabbed her wrist.
Chi Xuan looked at her gently. "Qingqing, come here. I'll teach you how to write."
And so the hand that had been showering money on a beauty one second earlier was pinned down by the real thing the next, as Chi Xuan guided it through writing another self-insert story.
Xue Qingrong was too embarrassed to look at the explicit things she was writing.
"Now you're embarrassed? But you weren't embarrassed to act it out back then. You even knew how to kiss me." Chi Xuan calmly held her hand and guided her stroke by stroke. "Are you going to load a save again?"
At last, Xue Qingrong burst into tears and sobbed, "I won't load a save again next time..."
"But we have to load a save for the story where you said I died."
Theme: Only through contact and understanding can you truly recognize someone's nature.
Finished reading the text. I bought the extra and I really didn't have the patience to finish reading it. The more I read, the more speechless I became. Originally, with 400,000 words, I felt that only the front part was good, and the back part was like a lump hidden in the cake... I had been looking forward to having a plot as good as the front part in the back part. But no. The whole plot felt like a piece of shit. The copywriting is very good. In the text, my mind was filled with the heroine's mother Shen Jing and her love-minded mother. I don't know if some of the plots were deleted because I didn't see it... It really looked like a scam. I even felt that there was no outline at all to write whatever I thought of. The most normal feeling in the whole text was Yixi, which really made me feel too uncomfortable. It's the first time I've written such a long comment, and it's also the first time I've received a negative score... Be careful when entering the trap, as soon as the heroine and the others cancel their trip to the island to play there, they can stop... It really makes me sad...
There is a sense that everyone is an actor playing the role of the reader, and now it is the finale, no matter good or bad, all come to make dumplings together, saying the words while making dumplings and spreading flowers. It feels ridiculous...
I don't know why the author ended it so hastily. It feels a bit like a forced happy ending. The first part was good to read, but the second part just feels confusing.
I really didn't expect this ending. It's such a sin. The protagonist is too generous.
How could Su's mother end up so well? Fang's mother could actually forgive her. . . And how could Wen Zhouqin have such a good ending? He could be forgiven for being so stupid.
Drive high and go low, I suggest you become the eunuch of the article and directly delete the memory of Chapter 91
Except for the two female leads, everyone else is amazing. It's so good that I'm going to puke again 🌈
Why is this so baffling, so confusing, and so confusing???
6. No way [showing hands] There is no logic
I didn't expect that Queen Gu and A's mother were really in love. After chasing each other for so long, I thought there was something hidden.