Clear the Apocalypse to Strike It Rich

A little suggestion, if the author doesn't like it, forget it, come on, bye

Come on, baby, so far the first chapter is basically all dialogue, without any description of the environment. Wow, the article you read is a little different from the author. You are unfamiliar with the world written by the author. You need to understand the protagonist's purpose, basic setting, environment description, etc. You need to lay out the settings but do it slowly and use simple language. Use shorter sentences. Uh, and baby, it took many apocalypses to get 10 million, even if it is n 10 million, it feels a bit uneconomical in the novel. I feel that the heroine loves money, is not calm, and is impulsive... In other words, this part is like a setting, and it starts very abruptly. A little suggestion, keep it up, it's good to hold on, you can look at other similar types to draw inspiration.

Emmmm, doesn't the heroine first ask what will happen if she dies in the apocalyptic world?

All kinds of problems come one after another = old problems are not solved yet, new ones come. If he had no choice, Yuan Feng would not come to Clover City. With their current situation, they might be here to drag others down.

All kinds of problems come one after another = old problems are not solved yet, new ones come. If he had no other choice, Yuan Feng would not come to Clover City. Given their current situation, they might just be here to drag others down.

I still don't recommend that the heroine be kind when she has no ability to protect herself. At least she has to make herself stronger.