Revising the story
Check out my new upcoming novel, "Reborn as My Arch-Nemesis's Hognose Snake." A silly little snake.
Blurb:
[Resilient, goofy, adorable bunny (Luo Bo) vs. two-faced, hypocritical yandere (Fu Ruohan)]
Luo Bo is a little rabbit spirit. After losing the food he'd stored for winter, he accidentally ate the Land God's spirit herb and transformed into a human. The Li family at the foot of the mountain took him in.
By a twist of fate, Fu Ruohan brought him home.
Fu Ruohan was wonderful. He went out with a hoe one day to clear some land, and the next day he had a little calf of his own. A few days ago, his clothes got torn, and the next day he had two new outfits made for him.
The only problem was his poor health. He coughed after one step and panted after three.
There was nothing for it. Luo Bo had to make him some nourishing soup: polygonatum and goji berry soup with oxtail, chicken soup stewed with codonopsis and astragalus...
One day, Fu Ruohan came back from copying books in town, carrying peach blossom cakes he'd bought at the Fugui Restaurant. As soon as he got home, he saw a rabbit with an egg balanced on its head.
He wondered if someone's little rabbit had gotten lost.
The bunny twitched its ears and moved its three-lobed mouth. "You're back! The soup's ready. Drink it while it's hot!"
The decisive and efficient chief councilor, Fu Ruohan, stroked the bunny sitting on his lap, munching noisily on a carrot. His smile grew more sincere.
The little bunny with its nest-like hair could only wash its face again with its tiny paws and fix its hairstyle.
Honestly, what a mischievous husband.
The newly appointed chief councilor had only one husband at home, and he doted most on a rabbit not even half the size of a zucchini. He didn't even get angry when it peed on his head.
"Who isn't even half the size of a zucchini!" Luo Bo, who hated people commenting on his height, stamped his foot furiously.
Luo Bo: "I'm not an ordinary rabbit. I don't just pee everywhere!"
Feeling a pair of paws no longer than two peanuts pressing down on his forehead, Fu Ruohan smiled with satisfaction.
Later, Fu Ruohan still thought he'd gone too far.
The little rabbit spirit sat on the bed, ears perked forward.
Looking at the round back of the bunny's head, he couldn't resist poking its fluffy ears. He leaned close to its ear and deliberately said, "Little bunny, I'm sorry."
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Reading guide:
1. Both leads are virgins, happy ending, one-on-one romance, with some original worldbuilding.
2. Farming story, romance, and growing crops.
3!!! The writing is amateurish, with no logic or brains. Just read it for fun.
Check out my new upcoming novel, "Reborn as My Arch-Nemesis's Hognose Snake."
[A hognose snake beauty bottom who thinks he's clever but has no brains x a cold, taciturn, handsome furry-fan top who gets hooked by his wife]
Jiang Liuying grew up wild and free until, at eighteen, he was suddenly told he was the fake young master and became an orphan with no one to turn to.
Everyone despised him for stealing the first half of the real young master's life.
The Jiang parents thought he was thoughtless, the real young master hated him to the core, and he was ridiculed and mocked at school. Even his birth parents resented him for taking everything from the real young master.
His friends also gradually distanced themselves from him after the real young master manipulated them.
When he took the initiative to leave the Jiang family, he unexpectedly died in a car accident.
When he woke again, Jiang Liuying discovered that he had come five years into the future and had turned into a hognose snake.
And not just any hognose snake, but his arch-nemesis Yu Yundu's!
The Yu and Jiang families had always been close.
When Jiang Liuying used to go out with Mrs. Jiang, Yu Yundu would hide behind Mrs. Yu's legs.
When they were in kindergarten, Yu Yundu liked to bite his face and make him cry. Even after Jiang Liuying graduated from high school, Yu Yundu still wanted to take his hognose snake away from him.
Unforgivable!!!
Hiss, hiss--
Fortunately, Jiang Liuying had food and drink at Yu Yundu's house, and sometimes he could even bite Yu Yundu to vent his anger.
Yu Yundu stared with a deeply furrowed brow at the golden-orange hognose snake that was biting his thumb joint as hard as it could without even breaking the skin.
"Why are you so bad-tempered lately?"
Jiang Liuying thought that after being reborn, he would spend the rest of his life peacefully in a box.
But Yu Yundu's attitude changed after he went to Xianhu Mountain.
When Jiang Liuying wanted food, it appeared the next second.
When he wanted water, there was water the next second.
Yu Yundu, who used to tease him once in a while, began spending long periods of time at home.
One day, Jiang Liuying left his box and accidentally wandered into a locked room. Inside were all his clothes, his photos, his ashes, and a contract to acquire the Jiang family.
The door behind him opened. Yu Yundu's eyes gleamed in the dark room, and Jiang Liuying took a frightened step back.
"Be good, Yingying. Don't wander off."
Ever since Jiang Liuying was caught in that room, Yu Yundu had become even more brazen.
He brought the snake along when the real young master was sent to prison and the Jiang family came to beg for forgiveness.
He brought the snake to meals, to work, and even into the shower...
Don't bring a snake into the shower!
Jiang Liuying bit Yu Yundu's finger, leaving two red marks.
Caught by the tail, Jiang Liuying's cheeks flushed. "L-let go of me."
Yu Yundu's gaze darkened. "What should I do if my snake is in heat? I think I should help him, right?"
Reading warnings:
a. A cute pet story. Updates according to the ranking before signing, daily updates afterward.
b. Sweet story, one-on-one romance.
Theme: Green mountains and clear waters are worth more than mountains of gold and silver
These people are so bad that they occupy land without anyone at home. In fact, I didn't raise Fu at all, otherwise why would he be so thin and thin?
"Restraint" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ comfortable
To be honest, after reading so much, I still don't understand what I want to express. . . I always feel incoherent
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