This is my first novel, and it has plenty of flaws and didn't do well. There are a fair number of free chapters, so feel free to take a look if you're interested. Readers following along during the serial run offered lots of feedback and suggestions. If something doesn't work for you, please leave a comment and let me know.
Before the mission begins
System: [Minister Ye, this time your mission is to care for a tragic villain and give her a happy, fulfilling life.]
Ye Zhixia: Understood.
At the end of the mission
System: [Minister, you were supposed to make the villain happy. You didn't have to get involved yourself.]
Ye Zhixia looked at their tightly clasped hands, then down at the breathtaking villain lying on her chest. She couldn't help feeling guilty. This doesn't really count as getting involved... right?
World One
[Flirtatious National Superstar Actress x Gloomy Heiress]
In the original novel, Chu Ning, the second daughter of the Chu Group, met a particularly tragic end.
Ye Zhixia stroked her chin. "The second daughter of the Chu family is missing me from her Five Elements. I have to protect her..."
Much later, in the manor house,
Ye Zhixia praised her. "Ningning, you did great."
Chu Ning's eyes sparkled. "Really? Xiaxia, do you like it?"
Ye Zhixia, held tightly in her arms, struggled a little. "I do, but darling, could we sit down and talk this over?"
World Two:
[Superb Female General x Ambitious Ninth Princess]
Princess Ninghua: "Father wants me to hand over the troops under my command..."
General Ye Zhixia: "How many?"
Princess Ninghua: "Twenty thousand."
General Ye Zhixia: "The Retired Emperor must be joking with Her Majesty the Empress."
World Three:
[Last-Place Junior Sister x Highly Cultivated Female Demon Beast]
Ye Zhixia: "A cultivator with no spiritual power who relies entirely on physical techniques? What kind of cultivator am I?"
Ruan Ning: "A sea demon without a core who can't return to the sea? What kind of sea demon am I?"
Ye Zhixia: "How can one broken person save another broken person?"
Ruan Ning: "Together, you have physical techniques and I have demon power. Who cares if we end up in the sky or under the sea?"
Reader's Guide [Must Read]:
1. The leads' stories in both the small worlds and the main world have happy endings. The two side couples develop gradually. The ending has no major twist or hidden meaning; this is pure wish fulfillment. The ones who are meant to marry won't be separated, and the ones who are meant to die won't survive.
2. World One is the starting point. The plot-to-romance ratio is eight to two, and it's quite long. If you aren't interested in business rivalry, I strongly recommend skipping around based on the synopsis. The second female lead spans a certain age range, and her temperament and outlook change with what she experiences. The story has three stages: upper, middle, and lower. (After the novel is complete, I'll organize the chapter titles and synopsis.)
Main issues: too much time spent on supporting characters, unclear focus, and some messy parts.
World Two is a transition. The plot and romance are evenly balanced. The story is simple, the second female lead is somewhat like a reborn character, and the pacing is light and fast. Supporting characters are only briefly mentioned.
World Three is the conclusion. The plot-to-romance ratio is three to seven, and the story has two parts. The second female lead is older, several hundred years old, and quite shrewd. Supporting characters are only briefly mentioned.
3. Ninety percent of the villains in World One are men, and readers pointed out that there were too many male characters. So in the next two worlds, all the villains are men, and no female characters appear as villains. Whenever you see a male character, assume he's a villain. Please avoid this novel if that bothers you.
Theme: Good and evil are always repaid in kind
My wedding day was approaching, but unfortunately I was involved in a car accident. My wife and I were seriously injured and our lives were in danger. The system gave me a chance to save my wife, but turned me into a scumbag who hurt her. How could that work? How could I, Lu Yihan, let my wife suffer? Click on the author's homepage, collect the author's pre-collection article "Scumbag A is Protecting His Wife Again [Quickly Travel]", and see how I protect love in every world!
I guess he saved his wife, otherwise why would he lose his demonic power as soon as he leaves her, but it will recover as soon as his wife gets close to her?
Let's have more daily interactions between the protagonists and more emotional dramas. There are very few emotional dramas between the two of them in this world. They are all about the two illegitimate children and the old man or their adult life. I hope there will be more emotional dramas in the next world.
I would like to make a suggestion, next time in a lily novel like this, whether there can be fewer redundant male characters, it all depends on the role of the supporting role. The role of the protagonist is pitiful.
I just like to see male villains in yuri novels. They are obviously yuri novels, but they always cause so many girls to cause trouble QAQ
"The subsequent plot has not passed the review", a chilling feeling in the spring?_>`
I really like the plot you wrote, because it's not the kind of mindless and awkward plot. It's really well written, even more exciting than the emotional line.
More emotional dramas! The last world felt a bit unexpected, but we fell in love with each other out of nowhere, and there were more career lines. This world has more emotional lines, come on!
Hehehehe, I am a shy person, good-looking_(:з∠)_
Wow, the career line and the relationship line are both very beautiful! Chu Ning's temperament is simply amazing, but there are more interactions between the heroines in the early stage, and in the later stage, they are all about career. I feel like I am torn between the Chu family and the Feng family, it all depends on the business war. I enjoyed watching it, but I just didn't understand it. I hope that in the next world, there will be more sweet love, and my career will be more comfortable_(:з∠)_