Highway Survival: I Have a Sign-In Talent

In fact, the writing is good, and the emotional line is also good. Great

After reading the previous part, I thought it was very good. I didn't feel that it was the first book at all. It was a pity that it seemed to be finished before it was finished. There were no flaws and there should be better data. But after the male protagonist came out, some places were too hasty and there were a lot of bugs. I tolerated many typos in the front. I still hope that some of the bugs in the back can be fixed. Maybe when the author serialized the game for free, readers were more tolerant, but I spent money and still hope that the experience will be better. The emotional line is just a bit useless. It can be seen that the author is just not good at it. It doesn't matter. The selling point is not the emotional line anyway. On the contrary, I ate the ones that were not written, such as Blue Star Consciousness and the Vampire. . . All in all, as a first book, it's pretty good. . . It is not easy to find a fully-edited book in Jinjiang now. It would be nice if the bugs could be fixed. Although it seems a bit rushed, I wouldn't be able to finish it in one go if it was longer, and I might stop reading half of it, so it's good to end it this way. The rhythm is good. There seems to be nothing else. Come on?

I love it. Please produce more, thank you!

Congratulations on the completion. There's still a lot of foreshadowing that hasn't been completely filled in, but overall it's still pretty good. Nice!

I have seen this resource box scanner for the third time. The first time I drew it directly, the second time I upgraded it with an upgrade card, and now there is another one. The calculation of road coins in the early stage is also very confusing. In the cycle of 114 road coins, I spent more than it and there are still some left.

The new cover looks good (?? . ??)

Although the writing style is still a bit immature, it is indeed a good road novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard in his next work! I really like this type of writing, and I also like writing about post-apocalyptic survival.

I have to give credit to the author, the writing is very good, but it's a pity that the last paragraph is messed up. The obvious thing is that there is no copy of the last wish, so the foreshadowing of the zombie copy before is useless, and the ending is a bit sudden. The part on the sea feels like a pity. After all, the island should be able to develop, I hope the next one will be better.

I want to read the next book. Natural disaster is coming. Let's draw cards first. Hey-hey

A small reminder, Dad, you made a mistake in pre-collection. You made all the pre-collections into open papers, so at a glance, it is obvious that you only opened a hole, only wrote one book, and did not finish it properly. In the eyes of us old bookworms, you have opened many books and only finished one, so it is very frustrating. But I took a closer look and found that the pitfalls were all prepaid. So, sir, if you see it, study it carefully, the difference between advance payment and open letter.