
My Obsessive Lover Is Pregnant with My Child
偏执攻怀了我的崽
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 168k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
53Chapters
1.7kFavorites
7.6Score
45Nutrient gifts
1.9kClicks per chapter
90Comments
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Reader comments 30
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I felt that the plot in the first few chapters was really dragging. There were so many psychological dramas that I was really tired of watching them. There were so many psychological dramas that the plot was really dragging, and I felt that the plot had nothing to do with the writing.
After reading three or four chapters, I came back to read it. I always felt that there were some inconsistencies in the article. The relationship between Lan and the protagonist suddenly appeared without any foreshadowing. What is the relationship between him and the other protagonist? I didn't understand it. It was very abrupt after reading it twice.
So strange, so strange, so strange
I feel like I need to practice my writing. A lot of information is thrown out all at once without any foreshadowing, which makes it very confusing.
The introduction is very good, but I don't understand the main text. It seems like a few paragraphs are missing for no reason.
It feels like it has nothing to do with the copywriting
After reading the free chapter, I feel that it is not biased and leaves a mark.
The beginning was a bit strange
Well, I feel that the plot is not very smooth. Come on, come on, come on, come on.
It's so messy, a lot of repetition, a bit verbose...