When You Actually Get Transported into the World of Bungo Stray Dogs

The concept is really good. A few people will truly write out their inspiration from the perspective of the choice between fantasy and reality... However, the early plot descriptions are somewhat vague in terms of textual expression and description points, and the senses - like using a spoon to scoop up a piece of jelly that slides around in a bowl - always miss the key points that can hit the readers the most. It can be completely expanded to write about the psychology of the heroine... There are many angles. The psychology of a character is very complex. If you want to portray a character through the description of psychology and thinking, you must think clearly about which character trait of the character you want to highlight in this description... And then describe the description that corresponds to this point clearly, but it should not be too abrupt, and it must be integrated into the overall rhythm of the article. Near the end, I used a long paragraph to describe the inferences and ideas from the protagonist's perspective... Actually, there was a bit too much text, and it looked hard... Actually, I still have a question. The emotional line of Ruoyouruowuu made me dizzy. After watching the extra episode, I was able to come up with it. In order to create a subjective emotional gap for the protagonist, he was more determined to abandon the fetters of another world and give up his life like this... But it's still weird. [I don't mean to say that such an emotional line is unreasonable] It's uncomfortable... It's like watching a very well-conceived composition forget to take into account the lack of structure at the beginning, but feel helpless outside the scene... The last point... The protagonist's decision to sacrifice his life was made too quickly, come on~

I like it, press the paw! I personally think that reality should not have anything to do with the characters in this kind of drama that transcends daily life.

Although it looks good and the concept is great, the plot develops a bit too fast. When watching it, I always feel a little empty in my heart and helpless watching the protagonist die, but overall it is still great!!

... Invasion of the third dimension, thinking too much... The technology of the Wenye world (in electronic communications, nuclear, conventional long-range fire, drones, biotechnology, etc.) Is at least twenty years behind reality, and the technology tree is too crooked... Nowadays, wars are not won by super weapons with one move, but by comparing the advantages and disadvantages of the military system, as well as the level of war potential such as industrial production capacity and logistics. Targets such as people with superpowers are too obvious, and in the third dimension they are living targets - the targets of beheading operations.

Teacher, I suddenly remembered, is Tuosi's death a vampire plot? It stands to reason that it shouldn't be so peaceful. Where is Tuosi here?

Wow, there is an extra chapter. This chapter is so exciting.

Illusive bubbles, but beautiful.

It's a good ending, I'm back home

Why?!! How could it be!?? Did Ranpo Dazai's plan fail???

咦嘻嘻嘻嘻嘻嘻嘻嘻嘻乱步宝宝我一口吃掉！！！