She's lost her memory and her life is hanging by a thread. What should she do?
Self-rescue plan: activate, activate!
Step one: Test for a Brilliant bloodline. She's a bloodline mutant!
Step two: Become a Sensory. Great, her native Star Chain is powerful!
Step three: Get into the Cosmic Academy. No problem, she'll take the top spot!
But as Ling Jiuyao fought her way through every obstacle, the day she received her admission letter, a wanted notice fell from the sky.
Ling Jiuyao was charged with:
1. Identity theft
2. Unlawful confinement
3. Conducting illegal human experiments on Sensories
4. Murder
5. Extreme endangerment of public safety
Was she actually a lawless criminal in the past?
"Teacher, our Jiuyao is a good girl. She never causes trouble."
"What? You found some criminal records?"
"Damn it, she must have been so eager to get ahead that someone framed her!"
A rain of stardust rewrote human history.
Human evolution emerged from chaos and entered a new chapter.
The Sasso Empire, the Saint-Honore Federation, the Cosmic Academy, the Hope of the Starry Firmament, the Zhemu Society, the Golden Radiance Liberation Front... One power after another took center stage...
Across the boundless expanse, we will reach our destination at last.
Reader's Guide
[Updates and paid chapters are on hold for now. I want to think this book over some more.]
1. Also known as Across the Boundless Expanse.
2. This is a future interstellar story, but it has a lot of new worldbuilding. The most intense conflicts in the universe are territorial expansion wars between the major powers, fought to seize stardust minerals.
3. Stardust changed the course of human history, and Sensories who adapted to it stand at the pinnacle of humanity. Bulky mechs were quickly replaced by stardust materials. In individual combat, Sensories need only wear stardust combat suits and compete using their Star Chain talents and Chain Arts. In space faction battles, fleets of starships led by powerful Sensory commanders are the main fighting force.
4. The powers compete fiercely for Sensories, gradually giving rise to a system of temporary contracts for them. Even Sensories trained within a faction commonly leave or change jobs because of differing philosophies of development. Given their power, Sensories and the factions they work with are not in a subordinate relationship, but are more or less equals. At times, Sensories may even hold the more detached position.
Theme: Fear neither fate nor the future
I thought I had almost enough, but when I looked back I saw that the update had stopped 😭 🥺 I think about it, someone once said that no one is great from the beginning. Madam, every time you write, you are updating your writing style. Maybe I said too much and made you autistic. I blame me for being too harsh. But I hope you are serious about this article because you really care about the opinions of readers [Spread flowers][Spread flowers][Let me be healthy] I hope you will eventually become popular, because your work has this potential [let me be healthy][let me be well]
By default, the children of strong women will take their mother's surname, which is a good thing! These are the values that StarCraft should have. Look at fists instead of defaulting to a patriarchal society.
Nice! Come on (
Wow, when I saw this, I felt that the world view of this article is very large and interesting. I remember that I didn't look like this before. It's really good.
After all, he was just a yin and yang, and did not curse the heroine's ancestors for eight generations. He kicked the heroine a few times, tore off her application form in front of the heroine, pulled her hair and maliciously cursed the heroine as a short-lived ghost who was worthless and would definitely die early. He even told the heroine to bury him as soon as possible before he died, so as not to bother other people to collect her body. You can't be so shameless and so on.
Madam, the words you use here are too malicious and monstrous. Normally, one or two weird and sarcastic sentences from the little guy below cannot reach this level of exaggeration.
Finally, I would like to mention briefly, Madam, the original title of your book is "Don't stop her from treating her illness!" (Interstellar) It's pretty good. It fits the character and is highly condensed. It makes people want to click in and take a look. Now this name has the feeling of a campus romance. It feels a bit too popular 😳
For people of the same age sitting in the car, this sentence is also very inconsistent, because the heroine gives people the feeling of an adult, not like a child. If there are many children in the car and the following is necessary, it is recommended to be similar to this: Most of the people who were selected to ride on this car were children who looked very young. Their family background seemed to be poor. Most of these people wore patched shoes that were almost unrecognizable. There were also patches on the clothes they wore, but these patches were cut into beautiful patterns and sewn on them crookedly. They didn't look shabby, but they had a different design feature at first glance. It can be seen that although life is difficult, every stitch and thread of these children is done with great care. The guardians behind them must love their children very much. The strange thing is that most of the children in the car were chattering, dancing and talking with their peers. They sat in groups of three or two, and there was no adult accompanying them. What about their guardians? My writing style is not good, so I wrote a little bit casually, but this is probably the meaning. I will give it as a reference for my wife [][]
Madam, I read it again. Your heroine has a little OOC. She has lost her memory, but she knows her name. It's very strange. It's best to see something with a signature on it to round it out. Also, it was strange to know that I had lost my memory as soon as I woke up. It was like I got the results all at once, without the proper process.
Since you are reborn, I can at least briefly mention what the Brilliant Bloodline can do. It seems that this world is the future. I wonder if there are mechas or any special professions that need to use this thing. Is there any common enemy in this world, such as alien star beasts or Zerg or some cult conspiracy? I hope it can bring you some inspiration.