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Also known as: [What Do I Do When the Brooding, Tragic Beauty Thinks I See Him as a Substitute?!]
Lin Jianwei transmigrated and landed in the City of Eternal Night, a lawless place. Badly injured and penniless, with none of the original owner's memories, she got the worst possible start from the start.
It's fine, it's fine. Since I'm here, I'll just keep my head down and survive.
After she'd managed to get back on her feet, she turned around and found someone even more miserable than she'd been: every meridian severed, his face completely disfigured, and his body covered in wounds.
A good deed a day. She brought him home.
After that, she cared for him attentively and kept him company day and night. Life was bearable enough.
The poor thing's severe injuries wouldn't heal. She packed her belongings and set out to search the mountains for medicine, but died in an accident, thinking that was how her life would end...
Who knew she'd open her eyes and, hey, she wasn't dead after all!
Not only had she been reborn in the past, she'd also discovered that she'd transmigrated into a book. The original owner was the universally despised villainess who would eventually have her cultivation crippled by the great villain, Chang Chaosheng, and be cast into the City of Eternal Night to fend for herself.
Fine, mystery solved. Back to the beginning: the worst possible start from the start x 2. It's fine, it's fine. :)
What hated-by-everyone plot? What tragic, beautiful villain? Out of her way! All she wanted was to return to the City of Eternal Night early, lie in wait, and make a new connection with the poor thing. She swore she'd help him escape his misery!
But after searching here and there, going round and round
The poor thing seemed to be, might actually be, the great villain Chang Chaosheng himself?!
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All his life, Chang Chaosheng bore the burden of avenging his deceased mother. He endured bullying and abuse, and after weathering countless trials, his revenge remained unfulfilled. His wings were clipped, and he nearly died. He escaped with his life and ended up in the City of Eternal Night.
Then
Someone saved him.
Unfortunately, she was the vicious young lady he'd once personally cast into this dangerous place.
No matter. He hid his secret identity extremely carefully and successfully, leaving no trace. She claimed to have lost her memory and didn't recognize who he really was at all.
Bonus scene
Lin Jianwei: That's right. You hid your secret identity extremely carefully and successfully. Smiles. :)
Chang Chaosheng: He thinks she's using him as a substitute, gets jealous and acts out in the shadows, then discovers the person in her heart is actually his past-life self... Not smiling anymore.
Reader's guide:
1. Pure love, no angst, a sweet romance, a little coercive, but the heroine is a master dog trainer. The sunny girl heals all!
2. [Volume One] Neither lead has been reborn. The heroine saves the hero, who frantically hides his secret identity in case she finds out.
3. [Volume Two onward] The two are reborn. The heroine doesn't recognize the hero, and he assumes she's using him as a substitute, brooding and losing his mind.
4. This is a romance-focused writing exercise. Please be gentle with it. (Sending hearts.)
My other novel, The Hated Senior Sister Was Refined into a Puppet, is being prepared for release. Feel free to add it to your collection! Xianxia romance with a groveling pursuit of the heroine~
Theme: Even in harsh circumstances, one should strive to stand on one's own feet.
How should I put it? I finished reading it, but it was actually very uncomfortable. I think the heroine need not be so heartless. In the article, I didn't feel how kind the second sister was to the heroine. Instead, I felt how kind the eldest brother was to the heroine. It may have something to do with the author's portrayal. I just felt The second sister's use of the heroine, this character is not very three-dimensional. I don't like her at all. The eldest brother is really pitiful. The author created a soft-hearted, sister-controlling, glamorous eldest brother, but he has such a tragic end. After reading it, I feel really sad! Maybe the author wants to express his lack of female rivalry. If in the end the second sister doesn't use the heroine to let the eldest brother go because of that half thing, I didn't see the second sister being kind to the heroine in the end, and the heroine saved her. I don't think such a character will be eradicated in the future. It's really uncomfortable. The author will give me a happy episode of the eldest brother. It's too painful. Everyone around him betrayed him, his wife betrayed him, and even the heroine betrayed him. The reason why he didn't become evil is really because he is a very good person! I hope the author will not be too burdened and the writing is very good, but under your shaping, I have a lot of feelings about the characters in the book. I really feel so uncomfortable. Please allow me to express some superficial opinions.
I feel it is amazing that the author knows about the affairs of the Lin family and the Wang family, but insists that the heroine cannot see through it at all; the author does write about the hardships of life for many women in this world, but what he writes about is the scheming sister who has nothing to do with the heroine throughout the whole process, and the brother who shows a certain lack of time to make jokes and think about the heroine in everything. In the eyes of the heroine, he is a "sister with a lot of excellent adjectives" and a "cheap brother". Although even according to the original plot, the sister is going to kill her father and brother, and the brother is also a loser, but when the heroine said heartlessly in front of her brother that being a ranger would be good, it really made people feel a little emmm
■Extra 1: The diary of widower Wangcai looking for his wife, which mainly writes about the first life. After the death of the heroine, Wangcai went crazy looking for his wife. ■Extra 2: After the main text, the wedding sprinkles sweets, mainly describing the daily interactions of the characters in the second life, and rounding out the ending of the characters; ■Extra 3: On New Year's Eve in Luchuan City, the villain refused to treat his facial injury and frantically covered his vest. Xiaolin suddenly had an idea and suddenly obtained all the subsequent memories [Corresponding to Chapter 09 of the main text] - Of course, he exposed him ruthlessly hh All the treasures who have ordered it will rate it 🐰 🐰
It was very painful to watch the rest of the book. There was no need to write about the second sister being a courageous and powerful person in this world in order to show the world's harsh treatment of women. Ringo was so unlucky. In the book, the kindness of the second sister to the heroine was not clearly visible because of the short space. The heroine's biological mother did not show any love or guilt for the heroine. The main plot of the heroine and the hero is complete and interesting.
It feels a bit too expressive of the feeling of loving a daughter, and I feel sorry for the eldest brother, but overall it looks pretty good.
■All the treasures who have ordered please rate ❤️❤️ ■The following is the menu of [Extra], be sure to eat 🐶 1. Extra 1: The diary of widower Wangcai looking for his wife, which mainly writes about the first life. After the death of the heroine, Wangcai goes crazy looking for his wife. 2. Extra 2: After the main text, sprinkle sweets on the wedding, mainly describing the daily interactions of the characters in the second life, and rounding out the ending of the characters; 3. Adding to the list... (Solitaire is in "Reply")
[Spread flowers][Spread flowers]Spread flowers, sprinkle flowers!!! Looking forward to the extra episode!!! 💪💪
What? It's finished so quickly [changed] I feel like this chapter hasn't been finished yet
"Shenshen" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ stretch
It's quite good, the writing is good, and the villain is very interesting. Even though there are some unreasonable parts of the plot occasionally, the flaws are not concealed.