System Activated: Submit Yourself at Once

The setting is quite interesting. I would like to make a suggestion. The parents are a bit short-sighted. At present, it seems that it has nothing to do with the main story. Either hand it over to the system and lead the country, or use the system to slap the bad relatives in the face. When writing about the former, focus on passing the level in the system. When writing outside the system, it also writes about the improvement of the country itself. For Just give one or two explanations about the relatives, unless you have hidden clues later that are very related to the system, such as which relatives cooperated with foreign people to rebel and fight, but if they are not controlled well, they will be scattered; when writing about the latter, focus on the old worries of the seven aunts and eight aunts, and simply write about the impact on the protagonist on the system. You can't have both. If you must, I suggest you start another article. It may be a new article or a side story or a parallel double line. Putting them all together will affect the main line too much. I have read an article before about a max-level boss winning glory for the country. The rhythm is very good. The main content is within the system. Things outside the system are also written around the system. The emotional drama is also around the system. It makes people's attention completely on the main line. The author can refer to it. I'm not giving advice, just a suggestion. If the setting is interesting, I'm afraid it will be buried. If you feel uncomfortable or suspected of tweeting, the author can delete it after reading it in the background. It is not intended to cause controversy.

The heroine's attitude towards the system seems to be wrong. Since she has entered the space and cleared the level, why doesn't she take the asylum reward mentioned by the system seriously?

No, why is the heroine's attitude towards God so hard to describe?

This is also an old author. Why does his writing look like a hammer in the east and a stick in the west?

It is a blessing among misfortunes that it is not contagious.

"Rubbing" is a big bug for the author~ inspect

The subject matter is good, but the logic of the writing is too poor...

I feel like my cousin is not very likable, and she wants too much for the rewards. She wanted to introduce her to a job before, and then she wanted her daughter to live with her. Now that she knows the medicine, she wants to order more for her daughter. Although they don't pay much attention to these things, it feels bad for her to make demands just by opening her mouth.

Why do we always describe relatives of the Cheng family??? If the relationship is not good, all relationships are broken.

I don't really hope there will be too many male-coupled plots. After all, I've watched them all without CP. I definitely want to see the female protagonist be beautiful alone.