We were all young back then.
I dreamed of becoming a wandering martial artist, righteous or wicked as I pleased, free from the world's constraints.
You longed to become the finest musician, able to conjure green mountains and clear waters with a flick of your fingers.
You never changed, while I only grew more and more lost.
How can I bring myself to say those three words?
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Nei Niu said with a smile on his face. . Forehead. . The cup is broken. . Just when I noticed my interest, you actually gave me a hard time!! Beaten ~~ burst into tears
I have never written an article, but I am used to reading articles at a glance. So I can't give you some solid advice. If it is not classified into the category of "beautiful writing", the plot is very crucial. The content needs to be enriched, the action and dialogue are all good, but the inner drama seems pale and pretentious in comparison. I love the detail. ----------------Since then, Ranfeng often went to see Min Shuang. But he never likes to walk through the main entrance. He walks up and down all day long, dressed in white clothes and dancing elegantly. Min Shuang will be frightened at first, but he will become familiar with it after a few times. He was used to reading quietly when a white figure suddenly flew over his head, or someone tapped him from behind while he was playing the piano. ----------This content feels very alive, I like it very much In fact, it's really good, and the sentences are quite clean and neat. If it were to be developed into a long story, it still feels a bit empty and could be expanded appropriately. After all, in my opinion, I still can't feel the depth of their "friendship" and lack some lively interactions, hehe. It's so incoherent, it turns out that it's so difficult to comment = =
Alas, it's always a bit of a contradiction to know the ending of a story. Besides, it's still a tragedy!!!!!! 11 The writing is good, and I hope the plot is not too cliche. Author↖(^ω^)↗Come on~~~~~~~Following