The beginning is well written and attention-grabbing. The ending after the death of Qinglong was too hasty. There was no trace at the beginning, no foreshadowing, and the rest was just self-justification. There were too many pitfalls. The next few chapters made me feel uncomfortable.
Yes, there are all kinds of mistakes, how can they be reasonable? = =
The male protagonist was poisoned two years later, but the female protagonist imprisoned the female protagonist two years ago just to cure the male protagonist's poison?
There are others that I won't mention one by one.
Netizens are right to comment that it is like a foot wrap.
Until the end, I was expecting Qinglong to suddenly appear. It turns out that he was not killed. Don't be a Jiangzi. Author, can you please help me bring him to life? Woohoo.
I felt like my eyes lit up after reading it. The use of words and the extravagance of the plot are more mature and natural than previous works. The detailed description also reflects a very rich imagination. It is completely different from the previous writing style. It is a breakthrough. It has the feeling of suddenly climbing over the barrier and climbing to the top of the mountain to enjoy the unique scenery. Although the author believes that it should end when it comes to the end, I still decided to write the chapter two years later. The main reason is that the last few chapters are a bit rushed. They are not the end of the natural development of the plot, but the end of a simple description. It is too abrupt. If it were 20,000 or 30,000 words longer, it would be perfect. The ending is not HE or SE, it just comes naturally. Regardless, it's a good article
Qinglong, Qinglong who was so determined, died just like that. .
So depressing
Ahhhhhh it's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it!!!
It's so well written, I love your writing so much!!!
It's indeed a bit of an anticlimax. If the plot of the third chapter could be fuller, it would be a good story.
The plot progresses too fast later, it would be nice to have more foreshadowing
Qinglong ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (crying)
The beginning is well written and attention-grabbing. The ending after the death of Qinglong was too hasty. There was no trace at the beginning, no foreshadowing, and the rest was just self-justification. There were too many pitfalls. The next few chapters made me feel uncomfortable.
Yes, there are all kinds of mistakes, how can they be reasonable? = = The male protagonist was poisoned two years later, but the female protagonist imprisoned the female protagonist two years ago just to cure the male protagonist's poison? There are others that I won't mention one by one. Netizens are right to comment that it is like a foot wrap.
Until the end, I was expecting Qinglong to suddenly appear. It turns out that he was not killed. Don't be a Jiangzi. Author, can you please help me bring him to life? Woohoo.
I felt like my eyes lit up after reading it. The use of words and the extravagance of the plot are more mature and natural than previous works. The detailed description also reflects a very rich imagination. It is completely different from the previous writing style. It is a breakthrough. It has the feeling of suddenly climbing over the barrier and climbing to the top of the mountain to enjoy the unique scenery. Although the author believes that it should end when it comes to the end, I still decided to write the chapter two years later. The main reason is that the last few chapters are a bit rushed. They are not the end of the natural development of the plot, but the end of a simple description. It is too abrupt. If it were 20,000 or 30,000 words longer, it would be perfect. The ending is not HE or SE, it just comes naturally. Regardless, it's a good article
Qinglong, Qinglong who was so determined, died just like that. . So depressing
Ahhhhhh it's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it!!!
It's so well written, I love your writing so much!!!
It's indeed a bit of an anticlimax. If the plot of the third chapter could be fuller, it would be a good story.
The plot progresses too fast later, it would be nice to have more foreshadowing