Ke Bai wiped her prosthetic eye for the seventh time. Dark red blood seeped between her fingers. Neon lights flickered as the world crumbled before her eyes: hacker? Executioner? Black-market doctor? Labels coiled around her like venomous snakes.
Hovercar disaster, skull surgery, neon explosion... On the holographic screen, the name attached to the astronomical bounty flashed wildly: [Ke Bai]
The bounty's target lit an electronic cigarette. Its scarlet glow reflected off her outdated mechanical left eye. Deep inside, blue data streams flickered past.
"My eye?" She exhaled a cloud of cold vapor and chuckled. "Come and take it, if you dare."
[Reader's Guide]
1. A serious, plot-driven story with a slow build, not a power fantasy.
2. If you expect the protagonist to meet your moral standards, this isn't for you. The characters' opinions do not represent the author's.
3. There are a lot of setting details, and they may be revised at any time. The completed version is definitive.
4. Most importantly: if you don't like it, just click the top-left corner and leave. I hope everyone enjoys reading. (Bows.)
Theme: Living together in harmony
????? The heroine's character doesn't look like someone who has lived here for a long time. What are you writing? In this rotten environment, surrounded by rotten people, the heroine is still like a little sheep living under shzy? Good at emotional breakdowns? It doesn't make sense at all, it's just dragging out the plot, right? She has been living in such a bad environment, how come her personality and thinking ability are the same as those of a three-time high school student?
. The heroine is too slow and a bit stupid.
No, why is the heroine so stupid and not vigilant in the slums?
The setting is very good, but so far it seems that the heroine's character is ordinary, even unlikable. At the moment of life and death, she suddenly sacrificed her life for the sake of the unfamiliar front desk, and her past experience did not reflect the reason for her doing so. Whether it's life stress or self-destructive tendencies, and for her mother's sake, she shouldn't do this. After desperately saving people, one became nervous and the other suddenly turned into a bad person. Then why save people at such a critical moment? If she has a good sense of morality, there should be some foreshadowing, but I can't tell from the description of the heroine so far.
The heroine is really careless, how could she be reduced to such a ridiculously stupid point?
So... Does this mean that this golden finger is not unique? As long as you have this prosthetic eye, you can do something like this
It feels so scary, the heroine is surrounded by evil people. Why do the female protagonists still have terminals in their bodies that can connect to data lines? Aren't they ordinary humans? Is it an artificial person?
The subject matter is quite good, it would be better if the storyline were smoother. The heroine's character also feels a bit jumpy.
Why is the heroine still deceiving herself? She has obviously felt strange many times.
Laughing like crazy, I just read the copy, and the heroine looked like she was being hit by someone else, and then I happened to read the idea at the bottom of the copy: live in harmony [laughter and cry] [laughter and cry] [laughter and cry] I laughed out of nowhere hahahahahahahaha