Born to Be Spoiled 2 [Quick Transmigration]

It's so painful. I want to emo. I'm already lonely now. There are fewer and fewer sweet articles about fast wear. This article is one of the few with good writing. As a result, the author stopped writing it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It's good that there are no pitfalls. Although the story still feels quite rushed in the end, at least it's over! ! !

Emmm, I feel like the female protagonist in the Xianxia world is such a loser, isn't she a monster? Why can't she help the male protagonist at all? She just shrinks behind the male protagonist from beginning to end. The villain indirectly manipulates the shark. Even after the male protagonist helped her bring her back to life, she is still so weak. There is no thought of revenge at all. It is really not like the heroine who traveled through the world. It is a waste snack. The ending is also very hasty and hasty. It has harmed so many innocent people. The villain is offline so easily. The scene of the final battle is not described. Come on, he died too easily and left people speechless. He should have been tortured severely. It should be the heroine's highlight moment. Isn't the heroine a demon that feeds on love? She could have used the dead pear flower demon as the cornerstone to torture the damn villain a thousand times. Severe revenge is the way to go. The first two worlds are fine. I admit they are very sweet. The last fairy tale is relatively difficult to deal with. I feel aggrieved and angry. I hope my wife can write better in the next article. Come on [Rainbow Fart]

... I can only say that Dada's writing is very good, but I probably won't follow it anymore, it's just for more experience...

Damn, when are you going to continue writing this kind of article? There really is no meal replacement, so I want to continue reading! !

Hey, Wife 1 and 2 are both bad, they are very interesting, why don't you continue writing them?

The ending was too sloppy and I didn't feel sweet. Rather than end in a mess, I would rather it end in a trap. Secondly, the entire article is too short.

When will you continue writing this type of articles? After reading this, there is no meal replacement.

The emotional writing in this issue of Xianmen is really delicate. You can expand it into a whole book just by reading it. It's really great. I want to follow you all the time [Caigou]

Ah ah ah, I don't have to read anymore. I've finished reading all three books. Wow.