Life is no more than a great dream spanning spring and autumn. What does it matter who is drunk and who is awake?
It is only a dream lasting one night,
a drunken dream lasting one day,
a dream of the mortal world spanning several decades.
Seeing through it all is just a jest spoken in a drunken stupor. Even a passionate man with ambitions that reach far and wide is still only a mortal.
Let us raise our cups beneath the moon and get drunk together. With drunken eyes, we laugh at the mortal world, while fallen blossoms stain our sleeves and settle into the dust. When the great dream ends, we smile at the spring breeze and autumn moon. Alone and awake beneath the rain, watching the winds of change gather over the city, we are still no more than ordinary people in the mundane world.
Why care about the six realms of gods, humans, demons, and ghosts, or the endless cycle of rebirth? When the demonic energy never dissipates, it will eventually gather again. Decades of spring blossoms and autumn moons, of spring passing and autumn coming, can be captured in just a few strokes. While alive in this world, all we can ask is to live with joy to the fullest. Who cares whether death brings regrets?
Since we do not belong to the Three Realms, then let us go back together...
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Suan Nai (Xing Xing Zhi Zhi): (What a wonderfully imaginative idea~ This Y clearly doesn't have the imagination to write something like this. To anyone who has read my work, sorry to disappoint you, ahem.)
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Hey, let's review the latest updates together.
I speak more directly. No wonder!
The characters are indeed getting more and more out of shape. Sorghum has a tendency to weaken. The writing style tends to be procrastinating. It was obviously suppressed without inspiration. [Okay, I shouldn't have pushed you into the trap in the first place, I regret it...><]
Still the same sentence. You like Dad Yun too much, so you let him take the dominant position and guide the direction of this article. Especially the section of the Well of Gods and Demons. The sorghum almost feels like soy sauce. There is no suitable transition between the casual and serious aspects of Yun's character, which is too stiff.
The rhythm of the article is also not well grasped. When Bi Liu first climbed to Qingluan Peak, it could be written as a relaxing plot, but it didn't become relaxed; when he knew that the catastrophe was coming, he should have been nervous, but he didn't become nervous because of the procrastination of the writing. I suggest that the Qingluan Peak section should be changed to be more relaxed, and the later sections should be changed to be more compact. The plot should be loosened and relaxed in order to have vitality - this is my experience in reading novels for many years!
Above. Uh-huh.
Y, keep writing after the exam~
I saw the letter in your bar...
If you are interested in writing letters, why not write more letters...
Look sideways
Poor T... I hope you get better soon, it's very troublesome not being able to use your right hand.
Wait for you! !
The last few chapters have been too idle, too idle, and they haven't done much to advance the plot. I want to see substantial development...
Also, why do you need to pull out the lamp jade? It's so hairy! When I saw Deng Yu, I just wanted to strangle her to death!
Uncle Chonglou——he sprayed it all at once without being calm. Brother Lou, why have you become an uncle?
In fact, I discovered a problem with T. I just want to convey my understanding of the characters too much to the readers, so there are too many asides about character evaluations. Especially Father Yun, followed by Shumao and Ziying. In this case, the writing will appear very verbose. And this is partly why some people say you are pretentious. In fact, it's better to just stop there. I just have to take control of it myself.
And because you like Yun Daddy so much, you wrote Yun Daddy so perfectly. Although Yun Daddy is originally affectionate, transparent, and free-spirited, and is a very close-to-perfect character, you highlighted Yun Daddy's strengths too much and made him repeatedly taunt him, which made him feel boring. And if you write Father Yun's wisdom too superbly, there will be a sense of distance and the characters will not be three-dimensional.
After reading so many chapters, I briefly shared my thoughts on the article so far. That's... Half a long review, right? See
You're a delayed ticket... Where's the update? What about updates?
Looking at ING depressedly
Uh... Zihe... I can't speak
Actually, I think Ziying likes Lingsha - -
To the finger, TT? So called? Uh... I want the link~~
Ah ah ah~~I love Qingxiao~~~But what does Tianqing's phrase about "father-in-law" mean? I can't think about it - -
Hey, let's review the latest updates together. I speak more directly. No wonder! The characters are indeed getting more and more out of shape. Sorghum has a tendency to weaken. The writing style tends to be procrastinating. It was obviously suppressed without inspiration. [Okay, I shouldn't have pushed you into the trap in the first place, I regret it...><] Still the same sentence. You like Dad Yun too much, so you let him take the dominant position and guide the direction of this article. Especially the section of the Well of Gods and Demons. The sorghum almost feels like soy sauce. There is no suitable transition between the casual and serious aspects of Yun's character, which is too stiff. The rhythm of the article is also not well grasped. When Bi Liu first climbed to Qingluan Peak, it could be written as a relaxing plot, but it didn't become relaxed; when he knew that the catastrophe was coming, he should have been nervous, but he didn't become nervous because of the procrastination of the writing. I suggest that the Qingluan Peak section should be changed to be more relaxed, and the later sections should be changed to be more compact. The plot should be loosened and relaxed in order to have vitality - this is my experience in reading novels for many years! Above. Uh-huh.
Y, keep writing after the exam~
I saw the letter in your bar... If you are interested in writing letters, why not write more letters... Look sideways
Poor T... I hope you get better soon, it's very troublesome not being able to use your right hand. Wait for you! !
The last few chapters have been too idle, too idle, and they haven't done much to advance the plot. I want to see substantial development... Also, why do you need to pull out the lamp jade? It's so hairy! When I saw Deng Yu, I just wanted to strangle her to death! Uncle Chonglou——he sprayed it all at once without being calm. Brother Lou, why have you become an uncle? In fact, I discovered a problem with T. I just want to convey my understanding of the characters too much to the readers, so there are too many asides about character evaluations. Especially Father Yun, followed by Shumao and Ziying. In this case, the writing will appear very verbose. And this is partly why some people say you are pretentious. In fact, it's better to just stop there. I just have to take control of it myself. And because you like Yun Daddy so much, you wrote Yun Daddy so perfectly. Although Yun Daddy is originally affectionate, transparent, and free-spirited, and is a very close-to-perfect character, you highlighted Yun Daddy's strengths too much and made him repeatedly taunt him, which made him feel boring. And if you write Father Yun's wisdom too superbly, there will be a sense of distance and the characters will not be three-dimensional. After reading so many chapters, I briefly shared my thoughts on the article so far. That's... Half a long review, right? See
You're a delayed ticket... Where's the update? What about updates? Looking at ING depressedly
Uh... Zihe... I can't speak
Actually, I think Ziying likes Lingsha - -
To the finger, TT? So called? Uh... I want the link~~
Ah ah ah~~I love Qingxiao~~~But what does Tianqing's phrase about "father-in-law" mean? I can't think about it - -