On the first day Zhong Xiaoli arrived in the Underworld, she followed the rules and reported to the Judge.
Judge Cui Yu checked the Book of Life and Death for ages, but couldn't find her name at all.
Furrowing his brow and stroking his beard, Judge Cui mused, "In my experience, someone in your situation most likely died unjustly. Whether you can be reincarnated will have to wait until the King of the Underworld returns before we can decide."
"When will the King of the Underworld be back?"
"The King has an unresolved case in the mortal world. According to the Book of Life and Death, he still has at least eighty years before his natural lifespan ends."
"Eighty years? That won't do!" Zhong Xiaoli anxiously circled around, rubbing her backside. "How about I try killing him first?"
So one night, Chongming, now reincarnated, looked at the girl sprawled across the bed, snoring loudly, and raised an eyebrow. "The world really has changed. Even little ghosts dare to come and steal the King of the Underworld's soul now."
Theme: Saving each other and becoming self-reliant
This is from Douban, this comment is for reference only (you can delete this comment directly if you feel it is inappropriate) 1. The writing is OK, the copywriting is OK, and the setting is OK. 2. The pace is indeed too slow and the narrative is too straightforward. There are no story points in the first five chapters, but there are multiple characters and multiple scenes, which is messy and protracted. 3. It is recommended to start directly from the encounter between the male and female protagonists in the human world, and the previous plot can be supplemented through flashbacks or backgrounds. It is best to have a detailed outline. Within three to five chapters, there should be obvious conflicts or ups and downs, or at least a clear story line.
Zhong Kui is surprisingly handsome
How can cats and dogs be close relatives? I'm shocked. Cats hate dogs the most.
Why hasn't the male protagonist come out yet? I'm already waiting impatiently.