I'm writing two stories at once: Please add my other story, I'm Nothing Like Her, I Only Know How to Spoil Giegie, to your reading list.
A second-rate detective heroine with first-rate imagination X a hero who says little and focuses on solving cases
Shi Sui'an is pulled into a mystery game called "Who Is the Killer?" for reasons unknown.
As a detective, she has to find the culprit within 48 hours to make it out of the instance alive.
If time runs out, or the killer turns the tables and kills her, she will never return to the real world.
Case One: Who Killed the Boyfriend?
A girl juggles two boys, and after her old flame meets her new one, the old flame jumps off a building that very night.
There's a complete chain of evidence, and the girl confirms the new flame has an alibi. So why did the old flame die?
Case Two: The Killer Has Been Dead for Two Years?
A murder suspect claims he once witnessed another murder, and the facts prove his accusation is true.
But the killer he accused has been dead for two years.
Case Three: Blood Sacrifice
A boy says he saw a vampire in a cave behind his village.
Is a vampire really drinking blood? Can self-sacrifice truly bring endless wealth?
Case Four: Green Juice
After her stepfather dies by suicide, half a glass of green juice is left on his bedside table. Her father used to drink the same juice when he was alive.
Case Five: The Missing Engagement Ring
Just when they'd gained enough experience to think they could breeze through every stage, they discover the game has leveled up. It can actually level up.
Shi Sui'an: It can do that too?! They're seriously trying to make our lives miserable!
And so they enter the intermediate instances of "Who Is the Killer?": the Battle Royale series.
These instances follow the law of the jungle, where might makes right and only the fittest survive. The casualty rate is higher, and the survival rate lower.
Battle Royale One: Squid Game
Escape from a ship. When law and morality are cast aside and force takes control, will people's choices change?
Battle Royale Two: The Source of the Fire
Children die in a fire during a kindergarten camping trip. Their task is to save all the children from the fire, again and again, in a repeating loop.
Blurb for I'm Nothing Like Her, I Only Know How to Spoil Giegie:
A seemingly normal, refined hero VS a spoiled heroine forced to do good deeds
#A gathering of master performers: who can put on the better act?#
#The world is one giant cycle of rewards and punishments#
#To do one bad deed, you have to repay it with one good deed#
#Every cause has its consequence, and you are mine#
#What goes around comes around#
Hua Jingyu wakes up to find herself back at the age of twenty. Heaven has treated her well. This time, she's sure she can win her brother's heart.
But things don't seem to be going as she imagined, because she's been bound to an "Energy Conservation System."
Simply put, every bad deed she commits creates a negative value, and she has to repay it with a good deed to achieve energy conservation.
Making someone who's done nothing but bad deeds go out and do good is utterly absurd.
But what can she do when the System has leverage over her? She can only "obediently" follow its orders.
Doing good before turning to evil makes things more efficient, after all.
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The thing Han Xingyi hates most in this life is a delicate, pampered girl. Touch her lightly and she'll break; glare at her and she might cry. His stepsister happens to be exactly that kind of girl.
But... why isn't she quite like the person he imagined?
She'll use every means at her disposal to drive away her suitors, but she'll also help children who have dropped out of school return to class.
She'll stay up all night working on proposals for her company colleagues without asking for anything in return, but she'll also put people with ulterior motives firmly in their place.
How can she be so full of contradictions? Which one is the real her?
Then one day, she takes him away. The girl he thought was soft and fragile smiles at him. "Brother, it's a shame, but I might not be as innocent and harmless as you think. Which version of me do you like better?"
Han Xingyi lets out a relieved breath. "What makes you think I didn't know all along? Playing along with you has been pretty fun."
Check out my completed works:
The Distance from Brothers to Husbands
The Best Candidate
Theme: Justice may be late, but it will never be absent
My big suggestion is not to use other characters in the novel to embarrass the male protagonist, that is, when writing novels, you should fix it more. Tell means that you don't just use characters from some novels to say, this male protagonist is so handsome, this male protagonist is a boss and so smart, which will give a counterproductive feeling. Instead, when writing a novel, you should be more aware of it. You don't need to say how smart he is, just describe how he solves the case. Through the description of the details of his solving the case and some reasoning, the intelligence of the character can be reflected, instead of using the characters to praise this person for being smart.
The male protagonist is described as a cold type at the beginning, but later on he calls him "little brother". Isn't it a bit strange? Wouldn't it be better to just "What is your relationship with this boy?" Ordinary boys rarely call other boys "little brother" in normal conversations, unless they are hurtful, funny or trying to please others. Take my younger brother as an example. At least in our daily interactions with him, he has never called a boy "little brother", and several of my cousins have never called him "little brother" in ordinary conversations.
I haven't watched it yet, but it feels like I just watched the explanation of the prototype of the case yesterday. I just watched the green juice case and bumped into it today. How could it be such a coincidence? Hahaha, I don't know if other cases also have prototypes.
It's so mysterious in all aspects... Suddenly there is direct evidence...
Pre-collection article: "You Within Reach" is a companion piece to "A Second-rate Detective Has a First-rate Brain". Please collect it. Forensic doctor Lu Siqiao x boxing club owner Shi Suiping As a little forensic doctor, a bold and careful cute girl, Lu Siqiao always wants to get wind and rain. But ever since she met the man named Toki Suipei, the originally smooth road of Bai Fumei began to become bumpy. Being followed, attacked, injured... What are these things? Who can tell her why she needs to be able to use force as a forensic doctor? You seek justice for the dead, and I protect you.
I guessed it!!!! I'm awesome!!!
Mengyu's shoe prints are indeed his, but he may not necessarily have put on his shoes and show up at the scene. It may also be someone else wearing his shoes and showing up at the scene. I always doubt that person who has a good relationship with him
It's normal to put on someone else's shoes and put the blame on others. Even if you answer the system's questions incorrectly, it's still a reminder in a sense.
I feel like the writing is quite good, the writing is smooth and the language and dialogue are quite reasonable. Why are there so few comments?
Why hasn't it been updated? Are you scratching your head?