
Taking Aim at Your Heart
瞄准你心里
by Raising a Cup to the Stream Clouds (把酒对溪云)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 324k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
The audio drama is out now. Find it on Manbo. For the drama's update schedule, see Weibo: XY Sweet Little Creek Cloud
[PUBG-inspired] [Second chance after a breakup] [Reunion after a long separation] [Mutual pining] [Mutual healing]
Second-chance romance from the heroine's perspective
Ten years of pursuit finally rewarded from the hero's perspective
Quirky, devoted, love-struck psychological counselor VS cool, scheming, doting-on-his-wife esports player
The newly formed NGU team suddenly shot to fame. Its captain, strum, was hailed overnight as "the handsomest assault player in the country." NGU's success brought good fortune to everyone, and the team went on to win trophy after trophy.
But after strum won the professional league championship, he suddenly announced his retirement from competition. The team began to decline.
For five years, strum vanished from the esports scene without a trace.
Some speculated, "Maybe he won the championship and decided to retire at the top!"
Others said, "Could he be injured? I heard he has a psychological disorder."
And some went even further: "Haven't you seen the rumors about his love life? He's dating someone!"
Everyone was stunned. From then on, strum's legendary story became an unsolved mystery in the community.
Five years later, the famous strum appeared out of nowhere at the World Cup, sweeping through the competition and leading his declining team to victory.
As everyone gaped in disbelief, strum draped in the national flag and holding his trophy smiled. "I want to give special thanks to one person. She was there for me as I found my way out of the abyss..."
Esports fans were overwhelmed and moved to tears. They had all said strum had no heart, but after catching up on the whole story of how he met someone special, they said, "You deserve to be with our sister-in-law! Stay together forever, and here's to ninety-nine years!"
As a sweet, well-behaved girl offline and a fan leader ready to charge into battle for her idol online, Shu Yue had one unrealistic wish:
The next time she hugged him, she wanted to do it as something other than a fan.
She thought she was sure to win him over. This cool, taciturn man only ever opened up to her, and everything went so smoothly that she got to call herself his girlfriend.
But before they had even been together for twenty-four hours, strum resolutely broke up with her and erased every trace of himself from her life.
Heartbroken, she focused on herself and became a psychology content creator with a million followers. Her past with him was buried deep.
Until five years later...
She discovered that the mysterious neighbor who made her nervous and always seemed to follow her was her ex-boyfriend: strum, the esports legend who had vanished five years ago!
The bitterness of her failed one-sided love came rushing back. But this time, strum barged into her life without asking permission. Only after his identity was exposed did he tell her everything.
That night, a torrential storm swept over the city. Shu Yue looked at his lips, inches from hers, and said in a trembling voice, "Then... let's make a deal. I'll be your psychological counselor, and you'll be my boyfriend."
Wen Yao kissed her fiercely, as if trying to release all the longing he'd bottled up for five years.
"I don't want a psychological counselor. You're the only cure I need."
Bonus Scene:
When the teammates learned that their sister-in-law and the captain had met when they were seven or eight, they cried out in unison:
"Captain, if you're not happy, who could be?"
Later, Shu Yue's cringey acrostic poem for Wen Yao from back then came to light.
Shu Yue also found the birthday love letter Wen Yao had written for her the night before they broke up.
They smiled and asked each other, "Are you embarrassed by the silly things we did back then?"
"Embarrassed, but I don't regret it," they answered in unison.
The blurb below is for the new story, When the Snow Stops:
Proud, reserved top student heroine VS obsessive, scheming attack-dog hero
Shen Shiqing had hated snow since childhood. She believed a heavy snowfall had taken her father's life.
That was until she met the real Chi Yunmu on a snowy day.
At school, Shen Shiqing was a reserved, low-key top student in the humanities, while Chi Yunmu was a cool, unsmiling top student in the sciences. Their grades were neck and neck.
They had no interaction at school. Even when they passed each other, their exchanged glances seemed tinged with rivalry.
There were enough girls who liked Chi Yunmu to fill several sports fields. Some even claimed his family was wealthy and that he was a young master who had never lifted a finger to do housework.
Rumors also said Shen Shiqing had a happy family and doting parents who treated her like a princess.
But that night, as the snow fell heavily, it brought two down-on-their-luck people together.
Shen Shiqing saw Chi Yunmu working at a restaurant. Chi Yunmu saw Shen Shiqing standing in the snow, with nowhere to go.
Shen Shiqing watched him wipe his hands on his apron, leave the restaurant, and walk straight toward her.
Their eyes met, and they both burst out laughing.
Rich heir, princess. They were both just as unfortunate as each other.
From that moment on, they shared an unspoken understanding, as if the gears of fate turning just for the two of them had begun to move.
Later, girls at school competed to start dating rumors about Chi Yunmu. Shen Shiqing couldn't help wondering why nobody was spreading rumors about her, the actual girlfriend.
No one could have guessed that the two people least likely to get together at school had become a couple. No one knew that one snowy night, the cool, brilliant Chi Yunmu had pinned the even prouder Shen Shiqing down and kissed her so passionately.
Reading Guide:
1. Volume Two begins with events told in reverse chronological order. The arrangement is intentional. Volume Three connects to Volume One, and Volume Two is especially compelling.
2. Both leads have psychological disorders to varying degrees, but they help each other heal. Please don't read the story with prejudice.
3. This story is entirely fictional. There are no real-life inspirations, so please don't associate the characters with real people.
4. Suggestions are welcome, but please don't tell me how to write. Do not compare or disparage other works.
5. The author's cat wrote this story.
6. Once the couple gets together, the heroine works as the team's psychological counselor. This isn't something an ordinary person can reveal publicly.
7. The heroine's psychological disorder has nothing to do with the hero! Nothing at all! They heal each other!
Theme: I want both passion and you.
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After careful consideration, I plan to save the manuscript until the full text is completed. There are about 50,000 words left. I will feel much more relaxed when I get on the list. If everything goes well, it will be mid-April. If not, it will be mid-May. Sorry, I am usually very busy and do not have time to type. I am at school from 6 to 11, so I can only squeeze in a period of time before going to bed to type, and I have to avoid my mother. I am really sorry (kneel down) I will probably finish it all before the summer vacation. Thank you everyone for understanding ~ I love you, okay ~
Hope to be seen by more people
Happy Lantern Festival everyone, I love you
The teacher writes so well, you must keep writing! Looking forward to the day it ends. It attracted me very much from the beginning, the male protagonist looked so handsome when he came back to carry!!! But will the injury of the male protagonist have any impact on future games? (Don't do it.) Enjoy the ambiguous scenes between the female protagonist and the male protagonist! It's really delicious to watch them tug and pull again and again. The hero's father is really annoying, a vampire. It's unlikely that the male protagonist's injury later was related to him. The heroine is so cute and has a supporting account. Looking forward to the day they win the championship
Sister, don't be too sad. This book is very nice. I really like it. The weather is cold. So wear more clothes.
Happy New Year, wife! ❃ႣᄎႣ❃
The final article also includes after-sales service! Happy New Year to my wife! [Spread flowers][spread flowers]
Come on sister, you still have a long future! If you persist, you will always gain something 🤩
My heart is always looking forward to the future; Now I am often melancholy: Everything is fleeting and everything will pass; And what has passed will become a kind nostalgia. I would like to dedicate this poem to my favorite author. Congratulations on the completion! Sprinkle flowers??????[Spread flowers]
No matter what, I believe that "I am born with talents that will be useful." Because of you, we have A Yue, Wen Yao, Song Yu and Miaomiao. Life may be terrible, but the future is still waiting for you. You gave your characters a perfect ending, and you should also give yourself a perfect ending. No matter what, I have to say thank you for your hard work for getting here! You're already great, aren't you? But don't worry about your future when doing good deeds. The fact that you can think about your parents just shows that you are a very good girl. Your grades may not be ideal, but grades are never the only criterion for success. Who else scolds you? Why don't you think they are jealous of you? I'm jealous that you have such a good talent and that you can write such an article. They scold people because they have no quality. Never doubt whether you are good or not. Rather than worrying about yourself and self-doubt, I hope you can be a trustworthy person (no, Youxin 🐶) and go crazy and worry them externally hahahahaha! You have never been a pig (I don't really want to use this word to describe you), nor a very stupid person. You are an author who has been working hard, a traveler who is always moving forward courageously. Maybe one day in the future, I can see your book in a bookstore! I wonder if there will be a chance to get your autograph then? Finally, congratulations on the completion! This trip has high mountains and long roads, and the road is difficult and long, but fortunately, there is no way out despite the mountains and rivers, and there is another village with dark flowers and bright trees! Congratulations, dear Xiaojiu, may you have a sunny journey!