A One-Third Chance (ShinRan | Comedy | Longfic)

Madam, I would like to make a comment. I think neither Aijiang nor Shinjiang is the kind of impulsive person who would quarrel over a single sentence. He and she are both very gentle, so I feel that this plot is a bit OOC (Madam's writing is really good! After the collapse of 73, I relied entirely on fan fiction to survive)

It really hurts me to see Aijiang so hysterical. I feel like in the comics Aijiang keeps banging on CP.

Although it's an ancient novel, it's really OOC. It's so uncomfortable to read.

Ahhhh, I'm still so angry. Ai Haihara and the new doctor here are very annoying.

It's amazing, the ending is really touching.

I wrote this article ten years ago, so I caught up here in one go. Oh my God, I love this article so much. It's so hard to find a cookie that I like among all the new novels with such twists and turns that my waist is thrown out. Moreover, this article is my favorite Xinlan article that I have read so far. I express my gratitude!

Kudo Conan! Devil!

So warm and sweet! Like it very much! Many endings are hasty or leave suspense, which makes you feel sad for a long time in the end... I like this kind of romantic and pure love! Watching my favorite Xinlan accompany me step by step for the rest of my life is truly touching! Xinlan and Xinlan's shy and reserved characters when it comes to relationships are also cleverly modified, which perfectly shows how both parties really feel about this relationship! Ah, anyway, the article is really great! ~~

Great! But I feel like Yusaku's character setting is a bit off. He has the ceiling of intelligence. It feels like he can guess it without Shinichi explaining so much.

If you don't love me, please don't hurt me (><)