The Eerie Path to Madness

In fact, I have been collecting this book for a while and found it was finished before I started reading it. Let me talk about the plot first. To be honest, the book is really exciting up to the copy of Leiyin Temple. The main plot is tight and exciting. It is because of the first hundred chapters that I decided to read the whole book. However, it is a pity that the plot took a turn for the worse from Jiange and started writing about the Eight Sects Competition. In fact, it would be okay if it was only limited to 40 chapters, but! This part is too separated from the previous main content and is too lengthy. It is a bit like the writing method of sect group portraits in other romance novels about cultivating immortals. Moreover, the appearance content of each group portrait is only in dungeons, which has no effect on the subsequent main plot. The heroine has not been upgraded, and many characters in it die immediately after they appear. Therefore, this part of the content is getting more and more boring, and I even think that it would be okay to delete it. The second test content is What's more interesting is that the content of the third test is really boring, and the first test is mediocre. All in all, I really wanted to skip the middle 100 chapters. It wasn't until the part from the end of the test to the heroine entering the world to eat monsters that the excitement started to come back, because I wanted to see the main plot development of the heroine destroying monsters. Logically speaking, the main plot of the whole text should also continue the main content of the first 100 chapters. I really...! It's such a pity, so I can also feel that the author has no outline as he writes and even starts to improvise. The last 100 chapters from the end of the competition can be regarded as a decryption of the world view of the plot, and at the same time the development of the emotional line. To be honest, the last 100 chapters are too plotless, and the reveal and the final battle are too sketchy [laughing and crying] The content written in the first, middle and last parts of the book is too fragmented. I can only say that after reading the first half, I upgraded it to 5 stars, the middle half barely got 2 stars, and the second half was supported by the emotional drama (because the plot is slightly worse) Then when it comes to the characters, the heroine is the motivation that keeps me watching. Her character is really unique and brilliant. The emotional line between her and Fozi is a bit difficult to comment on. If it is out of the context of her character, I just want to call the police, but in the context of this book, it is just right. I just think that the conversation between the two of them is really twisted. I can understand part of it when I decrypt it later, but it is not too sweet. It would have been nice if the heroine didn't use pua techniques to pua Buddha. Although the abnormal relationship is really wonderful, I can't stand the heroine and Buddha. In fact, there are many outstanding characters in other characters, such as the second master, Lou Yujing, the deputy master of Jiange, and Zhan Yinbalabala in the short story. However, the problem is that it ends in an anticlimax. Many characters have a lot of highlights when the plot is well written, but in the water-filled plot (including the various portraits of geniuses competing in the competition) They appeared with only one name and no follow-up/rough preparations for the subsequent battle), they were mentioned in one stroke or even died without writing (including the third master and the deputy master Xi), so there are characters with complete origins and transitions that were only shaped by the complete early plot. The Thousand Blades sect, Monk Zhan Yin and his master, and the trio from Leiyin Temple. To sum up, I think that I can delete more than half of the more than one hundred chapters and use that part of the plot that is not very necessary to think about how to write the part about the attack on Jiange, and think about the later battle part. Forget it (the book is already over, but I feel that the middle and second half are not satisfactory, which makes me sigh)

A belated ending? The front part is really nice and interesting, and the heroine's character is so interesting. I stopped watching the second competition in Jiange and skipped directly to the extra chapter. I still have to praise the first part, it was very well written, but it got a little boring in the middle and later parts.

Scumbag! ! That's it, you have no heart either. But I'm very concerned about what she said about Xuan Nian being the system's previous self. Has this been something the system has experienced before?

You can write this content, write a hundred chapters [melted] [cover your face and peek] [poor] [make me healthy]

. . . Can't stand it. . I really don't care about food but beatings. It's really uncomfortable to be fucked like this. . .

... This kind of person? . . . . . . Oh my god. . . . . . . I couldn't stand it anymore, so I decided to skip the emotional line and just watch the finale. The beginning was still promising. . . The results are getting worse and worse.

Oh my god... The hero needs to run away... Want to call the police...

Okay, okay, the gender change in this plot has received over 10,000 comments, but it was just right for the female protagonist.

Congratulations on the ending. Jiu Feng is really the only heroine I have seen in a long time who is like a little devil, arrogant and confident, always full of vitality, ambitious and self-centered. Sometimes it is very satisfying to watch her being arrogant and arrogant, but seeing her keep coercing and plotting against Xuan Nian makes me angry to death. I have to admit that she was very charming in my wife's writing, so in the end, Xuan Nian was easily tempted to compromise and join her, and it was natural to feel upset (? But I still wanted to see her beaten, except for the strength value)... As expected, the bottom line was also very flexible by her... Well, come on, madam, see you in the next one!

This article is over, thank you for your hard work! Looking forward to seeing you in the next article! I really like Jiu Feng and Xuan Nian, a unique heroine and her little whale hahaha! Thanks to the author for creating them. This is a novel that I like very much. I accidentally saw the title and thought it was interesting, so I clicked on it. Then I couldn't control it. I started reading it halfway and read many chapters over and over again. I am generally not very happy to follow up on updates. This article is an exception (out of a strong desire to follow up on updates, I also explored the update reminder function for the first time [shy]). The reason is that the heroine is particularly attracted to me. It may be due to same-sex attraction, hahaha. The plot and rhythm of the novel are very good (the details are appropriate. Although there are some places that may be expanded a little after reading, but the feeling is still good after thinking about it), the male and female protagonists are particularly brilliant (there is a strong personal emotion here, yes, I admit, I love [Shy] very much). I hope you will write more interesting characters in the future.