After crashing her spaceship into an asteroid, Ying Luan lost her memory.
When she woke up, a handsome young alpha was sitting beside her hospital bed. His eyes were bloodshot, as if he hadn't slept all night. The moment he saw her wake, he embraced her, his voice trembling with emotion and tears in his eyes.
He told her that they'd been married for five years and were deeply in love. A few days ago, after they'd argued, Ying Luan had been forced to accept this mission. He never expected an accident like this to happen. He knew he'd been wrong and asked her to forgive him and go home with him.
Ying Luan looked at the man before her. He was strikingly handsome and muscular, with an Imperial medal pinned to his chest. If he wasn't sincere, why would such an exceptional alpha lie to a penniless beta like her?
So she agreed without hesitation.
Back home, the couple were loving and affectionate. Just as their life together was becoming as sweet as honey, an alpha began showing up at their door again and again, speaking suggestively and acting flirtatiously.
At last, when he tried once again to seduce her with his clumsy tricks, Ying Luan threw a bath towel at him.
Ying Luan said righteously, "Don't come and ruin my marriage."
But the man looked pitiful. "I'm the one who married you. Back on the junk planet, we made a private vow to each other and registered our marriage. Don't you remember?"
He pulled out a gleaming marriage certificate, leaving Ying Luan stunned.
In the Empire, the law strictly allowed only one spouse per person. Violators were sentenced to at least five years of penal exile.
That meant one of the two men was lying.
Unwilling to commit bigamy, Ying Luan decided to find out which one.
Before You Read:
1. Male A, female B; boy-girl romance; one-to-one ending. Not a strong female lead story or a wish-fulfillment story. Plenty of messy romance, but there's a plot too.
2. Neither man is normal. One has a psychological problem that causes physical symptoms, while the other has a physical problem that causes psychological symptoms. The story is divided fairly evenly between them, but Chu Weili appears later, so he gets more focus in the latter part.
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Blurb and title finalized on August 14, 2023.
Coming soon: After Crossing the Line. Another messy ABO story in my usual style. Please bookmark it!
One morning, Xu Yanliu worked up the courage to say the words she'd been hesitating over for a long time. "Maybe we should stop seeing each other..."
The alpha beside the bed turned toward her. His deep-blue eyes narrowed slightly as he studied her.
Stumbling over her words, she said, "My coworkers might have seen you drop me off at work the other day... We didn't meet under normal circumstances in the first place. We shouldn't be doing this..."
"And?" he asked, as casually as ever.
"We, we shouldn't do this. People will gossip behind our backs." She couldn't bring herself to meet his eyes, lowering her head further and further. "Please let me go..."
"You think it's wrong now? You didn't think so last night." He leaned over her with a cold laugh. "What kind of woman gets together with someone and then just walks away without a care?"
His hand climbed to her shoulder, kneading it with just enough pressure. "If I let you go, who will you turn to next? Your ex-fiancé, your brother, or your boss?"
He'd hit too close to home. She couldn't speak and could only sob quietly.
He wiped away her tears. "Xu Yanliu, what did you tell me at the start? You said you were single, your brother was strict with you, your boss treated you harshly, and I was the only one who treated you well and cared about you. I believed your lies. And then what?
You ruined my whole life. Now you want me to let you go, but who's going to let me go?"
The alpha leaned in and kissed her lips. "Cut ties with all of them. Don't make me hate you."
Before You Read:
1. One-to-one throughout and at the end; boy-girl romance. The female lead is sexually experienced, the male lead is not. She has no feelings for her fiancé and only stays with him because of various pressures, eventually breaking off the engagement. Other men will have one-sided crushes on her.
2. The male lead uses his power, looks, and words to pressure and tempt the female lead. He has low moral standards and drags her down with him. Please don't read if you can't accept that.
3. The female lead is weak, not strong, and plain-looking. She's timid and greedy. At first, she's only a little greedy, but she becomes more and more so, and once she crosses the line, there's no going back. She's a traditional omega in her thinking, but physically she can't resist temptation. The story therefore spends a lot of time on her inner struggle as she wavers between morality and desire. The male lead will also go mad over her timidity and greed. He lights the fire in her heart, but can't put it out. If you don't accept these characters or plot points, please stop reading.
Theme: Treat others honestly.
After reading it, I thought it was pretty good when I got to about 40 chapters. The further back I went, the less I understood it. At first, I thought it was just a simple love story about two men competing in a Shura field. Lu is the second male lead throughout the whole story, and the male lead's role is pitiful. Author I didn't spend a lot of pen and ink describing the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. I just briefly mentioned the story of their time on the garbage planet. I just wrote the beginning and ended it, and then jumped directly to the two of them getting the certificate. What about the middle process? I was totally baffled by what I saw. Doesn't the heroine have a very high sense of morality? Doesn't she have a fiancé? Even if she was disappointed with the second male lead, had a quarrel, or had a cold war, she wouldn't just go to another planet to get married to another man and get the certificate directly. The female protagonist had sex with the male protagonist without any resistance and helped him through the passion period. I was totally dumbfounded at the time, and I was thinking, well, don't you have a fiancé? Of course, I'm not saying that the heroine should always uphold female virtues or anything like that. I'm just curious about what her moral standards are? If the engagement with the second male lead is broken off and the two break up completely, then let's talk about the next one. The heroine can do with as many men as she likes. She was having sex with another man, and the male protagonist didn't know she had a fiancé at the time, and wanted to have pure love with her. However, the female protagonist's reaction was that although she had a fiancé, she felt that it was okay to hang out outside before they were officially married, and I thought: Huh? She just let it go, but ended up getting the certificate from the male lead. I said: Huh? ? ? I really couldn't understand and was really confused, because the male protagonist had too few scenes, and the author didn't describe much about the sweet time between the male and female protagonists in the past. I didn't feel how much the male and female protagonists loved each other at all.
The heroine has been saying that she hates lies and is very angry that the male protagonist lied to her. In her mind, the male protagonist is a person with very poor moral character and no bottom line. Although he is indeed, I don't see him being bad to the female protagonist. And judging from the flashbacks of the female protagonist later, she only had a bad impression of the male protagonist before she lost her memory. She only saw the male protagonist tearing up the letter from the school girl. She didn't see the male protagonist doing any other bad things, right? So why on earth did she argue with the second male lead and why did she hate the second male lead? I know that the second male lead must have done a lot of bad things in private, but from the perspective of the heroine, she didn't know about it at all. She didn't know about it before she lost her memory. Did the author not write it at all?
When I say that he didn't treat the heroine badly, I mean before they quarreled, before the heroine had an accident, before she lost her memory, not after she lost her memory, because the heroine in the whole story is in a state of amnesia most of the time. The cheating and all kinds of bad things that the male protagonist did to the female protagonist were all said through other people's mouths, or the heroine's occasional memory flashbacks, but in the heroine's occasional memory flashbacks, the male protagonist didn't seem to be that bad to her, right? Until the finale, I didn't understand why the heroine hated the second male protagonist so much. What the second male protagonist did later was indeed unforgivable, but before she lost her memory, what I cared about most was before the heroine lost her memory, before she lost her memory! What did he do to the heroine to make her hate him so much? I was confused and confused, thinking that it would be clear in the finale, but it didn't happen. Just so suddenly, the male protagonist suddenly appeared, and then killed the second male lead. Then the second male lead could be resurrected, but he was killed by the previous female protagonist's boss. Why did the female protagonist's boss know that he was there? No one knew that he would be resurrected before, so it couldn't be that the male protagonist told the female protagonist's boss to ask him to give the male protagonist a touch-up. After the second male protagonist was resurrected, the place he was going to should be his very confidential secret base. How did the female protagonist's boss know that place? There is no reason, no logic, just to hurry up the ending. A supporting character with no role, just like this, completely kills the second male lead. Me: Huh? ? ?
And because the author didn't write clearly what the male protagonist did to her before she lost her memory, which made her intolerable and unforgivable, then the love between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was not just that she and the male protagonist were engaged, and then went to the garbage star to cheat with other men?
When he met that python in that forest, the second male lead gave the necklace to the female protagonist, and then used the female protagonist to attract the python, and then did a test or something, but it seemed that they were not together at that time, right? The second male lead is a person who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, so isn't it normal for him to take advantage of the female lead? The two of them were not together at that time. If the heroine and the second hero were together, and the second hero cheated on her, and then took advantage of her, regardless of the danger to her life, then it would be normal for the heroine to be angry later, but weren't they not together at this time? Moreover, the heroine knew about this matter after she lost her memory, so why did she hate the second male lead before? Or am I missing something or am I remembering it wrong? I really couldn't understand it and was so confused.
Then the main line of the plot is also very strange. I feel that the author has laid out the framework of this world so much. Abo plus spiritual power and spiritual body (isn't this a whistle?) And then there is the classic confrontation between the Federation and the Empire, but there is basically no high-level writing on the Federation side. There are only high-level figures in the empire, and there is only the emperor in the empire. When I first saw the emperor eating the heroine's spiritual body, I thought he was some kind of awesome and difficult boss, but suddenly he was killed by his sister casually. I said: Huh? Then from the very beginning I have been writing about going to find the heroine's best friend Qizhen. I have to mention her every few chapters, and I have to mention going to her every few chapters. I thought she had so many secrets hidden in her body, and what a great secret she found in the emperor. So her husband died and she ran away. The result was that she was just eaten by the emperor. I'm not saying that it's not serious that she was eaten by the emperor. I just said that the author has laid out so much, and this is it in the end? The heroine's spirit body was also eaten, and what the emperor said to the heroine about Qizhen was so ambiguous, I thought the two of them had some sort of forced love.
Then when Qizhen ran away, she also took a child with her, because it was not said at the beginning who the child belonged to. I guessed at the time that the child was the result of the emperor forcing the princess to have an affair, or the emperor forced Qizhen to give birth to the child, and then Qizhen ran away with the ball (covering her face). I was confused at the time. It's so funny that this child doesn't have any bizarre life experience. He is just an ordinary, princess's child. This is just the setting. Then why does the emperor have such an ambiguous attitude towards Qizhen and want to capture her so much? If he wants to devour the divine body, he won't only eat her, but also the others? He also ate the heroine's food, and he didn't lock her up. If people with spiritual bodies were to be used for experiments, Qizhen would not be the only one. He had so many people who could be used for experiments.
Then there is something that the heroine has been going to the forest to investigate. It is also related to mental power and can cause people to have hallucinations. The place where Qizhen was inexplicably injured, and the one that almost caused many students to be wiped out later. The author did not explain clearly what it was, and then briefly mentioned it, saying that it was something hidden by the Federation here, and then the heroine pressed a button to turn it off. Me: Huh? ? ? So what role does the federation play here? It is a brick, and it needs to be moved wherever it needs to be.
Also, that time when the group was almost wiped out, the heroine went after the python, and then the second hero stayed alone with his classmates. Did he really move everyone down the mountain by himself? Or what? How else could he have been injured? But when the heroine praised him, he felt very unnatural and guilty. So what exactly did he do? It's not written clearly here either.
There is also the male protagonist's humanoid brother. The male protagonist is so full of technology points that he can create such a being that can almost be regarded as a real human being. What is his role? The article says that he will be used to modify genes and save and help more children, but in fact I feel that his role is to have a crush on the female protagonist, and if the male protagonist dies, he will take care of her and love her on his behalf (face covering)
The second male lead's brother is also the same. He likes the female lead inexplicably. Of course, the setting of the female lead's heartthrob is very good and I like it very much. It's also good that the second lead male lead's brother loves the female lead, no problem. However, in this article, his role is only a little. He appears out of nowhere and then uses pheromones to control him. He controlled the heroine, and then appeared again for no reason, using pheromones to control the heroine, or saying something bad about his brother in front of the heroine, and then he no longer had a role in the scene, and he went offline directly without any explanation. I know he is a tool man, but this is too much of a tool man (face covering)
There is also the female protagonist, who has been saying that she is very strong and has strong mental power, but in fact she has not been used several times in this whole article. Then the male protagonist can also suppress her, the second male protagonist can also use methods to control her, the second male protagonist's brother can also use pheromones to control her, and the emperor can also eat his spiritual body casually. It feels like being very strong is a fashionable setting, but in fact the main male characters in this article are stronger than her. Fortunately, the emperor was killed in the end, although the counterattack was also very sudden.
There is also the noble lady classmate of the heroine when she was studying. Her plot is also very strange. Alas, there are too many things in this article that are not clearly written. It really made me confused and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became. Originally, I was just illustrating a twisty story about Xiong competing in the Shura field, but the author had to add so many settings in it, and it felt like it was going to be a drama, but in fact nothing was written clearly (face covering)
This seems to be the author's first original novel. The first thirty or forty chapters are okay, but then it becomes more and more confusing. Then here is a small suggestion. If the author confirms the male protagonist in a future article, then he should either appear early, or if he appears late, write more, and provide more foreshadowing and description. Otherwise, if he appears so late, there will be no scenes later, but it is a bit humorous to talk about how much he and the female protagonist love each other.
Then just grasp one main point and write it. Don't want to write both a multi-character emotional drama and a very serious main plot. Don't write such a big framework. I hope that the author will write better and better in the future.
The puppy won! I have to laugh when I dream, hahahahahaha
Alright, alright, alright
""Chu Weili" gave the author a big bug~
Wrong name
What is a lover?
Madam, are there any other extras in this book? Are you still writing it? [Kiss]
Wow, I finally waited for the extra episode! Happy New Year from the author!
When I saw the title, I thought it was Lu Yanxing's last wish, but I didn't expect it. . . . . Woooooooooooooo
Take good care of your health [pill], you look good, come on! [Spread flowers]
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After reading it, I thought it was pretty good when I got to about 40 chapters. The further back I went, the less I understood it. At first, I thought it was just a simple love story about two men competing in a Shura field. Lu is the second male lead throughout the whole story, and the male lead's role is pitiful. Author I didn't spend a lot of pen and ink describing the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. I just briefly mentioned the story of their time on the garbage planet. I just wrote the beginning and ended it, and then jumped directly to the two of them getting the certificate. What about the middle process? I was totally baffled by what I saw. Doesn't the heroine have a very high sense of morality? Doesn't she have a fiancé? Even if she was disappointed with the second male lead, had a quarrel, or had a cold war, she wouldn't just go to another planet to get married to another man and get the certificate directly. The female protagonist had sex with the male protagonist without any resistance and helped him through the passion period. I was totally dumbfounded at the time, and I was thinking, well, don't you have a fiancé? Of course, I'm not saying that the heroine should always uphold female virtues or anything like that. I'm just curious about what her moral standards are? If the engagement with the second male lead is broken off and the two break up completely, then let's talk about the next one. The heroine can do with as many men as she likes. She was having sex with another man, and the male protagonist didn't know she had a fiancé at the time, and wanted to have pure love with her. However, the female protagonist's reaction was that although she had a fiancé, she felt that it was okay to hang out outside before they were officially married, and I thought: Huh? She just let it go, but ended up getting the certificate from the male lead. I said: Huh? ? ? I really couldn't understand and was really confused, because the male protagonist had too few scenes, and the author didn't describe much about the sweet time between the male and female protagonists in the past. I didn't feel how much the male and female protagonists loved each other at all. The heroine has been saying that she hates lies and is very angry that the male protagonist lied to her. In her mind, the male protagonist is a person with very poor moral character and no bottom line. Although he is indeed, I don't see him being bad to the female protagonist. And judging from the flashbacks of the female protagonist later, she only had a bad impression of the male protagonist before she lost her memory. She only saw the male protagonist tearing up the letter from the school girl. She didn't see the male protagonist doing any other bad things, right? So why on earth did she argue with the second male lead and why did she hate the second male lead? I know that the second male lead must have done a lot of bad things in private, but from the perspective of the heroine, she didn't know about it at all. She didn't know about it before she lost her memory. Did the author not write it at all? When I say that he didn't treat the heroine badly, I mean before they quarreled, before the heroine had an accident, before she lost her memory, not after she lost her memory, because the heroine in the whole story is in a state of amnesia most of the time. The cheating and all kinds of bad things that the male protagonist did to the female protagonist were all said through other people's mouths, or the heroine's occasional memory flashbacks, but in the heroine's occasional memory flashbacks, the male protagonist didn't seem to be that bad to her, right? Until the finale, I didn't understand why the heroine hated the second male protagonist so much. What the second male protagonist did later was indeed unforgivable, but before she lost her memory, what I cared about most was before the heroine lost her memory, before she lost her memory! What did he do to the heroine to make her hate him so much? I was confused and confused, thinking that it would be clear in the finale, but it didn't happen. Just so suddenly, the male protagonist suddenly appeared, and then killed the second male lead. Then the second male lead could be resurrected, but he was killed by the previous female protagonist's boss. Why did the female protagonist's boss know that he was there? No one knew that he would be resurrected before, so it couldn't be that the male protagonist told the female protagonist's boss to ask him to give the male protagonist a touch-up. After the second male protagonist was resurrected, the place he was going to should be his very confidential secret base. How did the female protagonist's boss know that place? There is no reason, no logic, just to hurry up the ending. A supporting character with no role, just like this, completely kills the second male lead. Me: Huh? ? ? And because the author didn't write clearly what the male protagonist did to her before she lost her memory, which made her intolerable and unforgivable, then the love between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was not just that she and the male protagonist were engaged, and then went to the garbage star to cheat with other men? When he met that python in that forest, the second male lead gave the necklace to the female protagonist, and then used the female protagonist to attract the python, and then did a test or something, but it seemed that they were not together at that time, right? The second male lead is a person who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, so isn't it normal for him to take advantage of the female lead? The two of them were not together at that time. If the heroine and the second hero were together, and the second hero cheated on her, and then took advantage of her, regardless of the danger to her life, then it would be normal for the heroine to be angry later, but weren't they not together at this time? Moreover, the heroine knew about this matter after she lost her memory, so why did she hate the second male lead before? Or am I missing something or am I remembering it wrong? I really couldn't understand it and was so confused. Then the main line of the plot is also very strange. I feel that the author has laid out the framework of this world so much. Abo plus spiritual power and spiritual body (isn't this a whistle?) And then there is the classic confrontation between the Federation and the Empire, but there is basically no high-level writing on the Federation side. There are only high-level figures in the empire, and there is only the emperor in the empire. When I first saw the emperor eating the heroine's spiritual body, I thought he was some kind of awesome and difficult boss, but suddenly he was killed by his sister casually. I said: Huh? Then from the very beginning I have been writing about going to find the heroine's best friend Qizhen. I have to mention her every few chapters, and I have to mention going to her every few chapters. I thought she had so many secrets hidden in her body, and what a great secret she found in the emperor. So her husband died and she ran away. The result was that she was just eaten by the emperor. I'm not saying that it's not serious that she was eaten by the emperor. I just said that the author has laid out so much, and this is it in the end? The heroine's spirit body was also eaten, and what the emperor said to the heroine about Qizhen was so ambiguous, I thought the two of them had some sort of forced love. Then when Qizhen ran away, she also took a child with her, because it was not said at the beginning who the child belonged to. I guessed at the time that the child was the result of the emperor forcing the princess to have an affair, or the emperor forced Qizhen to give birth to the child, and then Qizhen ran away with the ball (covering her face). I was confused at the time. It's so funny that this child doesn't have any bizarre life experience. He is just an ordinary, princess's child. This is just the setting. Then why does the emperor have such an ambiguous attitude towards Qizhen and want to capture her so much? If he wants to devour the divine body, he won't only eat her, but also the others? He also ate the heroine's food, and he didn't lock her up. If people with spiritual bodies were to be used for experiments, Qizhen would not be the only one. He had so many people who could be used for experiments. Then there is something that the heroine has been going to the forest to investigate. It is also related to mental power and can cause people to have hallucinations. The place where Qizhen was inexplicably injured, and the one that almost caused many students to be wiped out later. The author did not explain clearly what it was, and then briefly mentioned it, saying that it was something hidden by the Federation here, and then the heroine pressed a button to turn it off. Me: Huh? ? ? So what role does the federation play here? It is a brick, and it needs to be moved wherever it needs to be. Also, that time when the group was almost wiped out, the heroine went after the python, and then the second hero stayed alone with his classmates. Did he really move everyone down the mountain by himself? Or what? How else could he have been injured? But when the heroine praised him, he felt very unnatural and guilty. So what exactly did he do? It's not written clearly here either. There is also the male protagonist's humanoid brother. The male protagonist is so full of technology points that he can create such a being that can almost be regarded as a real human being. What is his role? The article says that he will be used to modify genes and save and help more children, but in fact I feel that his role is to have a crush on the female protagonist, and if the male protagonist dies, he will take care of her and love her on his behalf (face covering) The second male lead's brother is also the same. He likes the female lead inexplicably. Of course, the setting of the female lead's heartthrob is very good and I like it very much. It's also good that the second lead male lead's brother loves the female lead, no problem. However, in this article, his role is only a little. He appears out of nowhere and then uses pheromones to control him. He controlled the heroine, and then appeared again for no reason, using pheromones to control the heroine, or saying something bad about his brother in front of the heroine, and then he no longer had a role in the scene, and he went offline directly without any explanation. I know he is a tool man, but this is too much of a tool man (face covering) There is also the female protagonist, who has been saying that she is very strong and has strong mental power, but in fact she has not been used several times in this whole article. Then the male protagonist can also suppress her, the second male protagonist can also use methods to control her, the second male protagonist's brother can also use pheromones to control her, and the emperor can also eat his spiritual body casually. It feels like being very strong is a fashionable setting, but in fact the main male characters in this article are stronger than her. Fortunately, the emperor was killed in the end, although the counterattack was also very sudden. There is also the noble lady classmate of the heroine when she was studying. Her plot is also very strange. Alas, there are too many things in this article that are not clearly written. It really made me confused and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became. Originally, I was just illustrating a twisty story about Xiong competing in the Shura field, but the author had to add so many settings in it, and it felt like it was going to be a drama, but in fact nothing was written clearly (face covering) This seems to be the author's first original novel. The first thirty or forty chapters are okay, but then it becomes more and more confusing. Then here is a small suggestion. If the author confirms the male protagonist in a future article, then he should either appear early, or if he appears late, write more, and provide more foreshadowing and description. Otherwise, if he appears so late, there will be no scenes later, but it is a bit humorous to talk about how much he and the female protagonist love each other. Then just grasp one main point and write it. Don't want to write both a multi-character emotional drama and a very serious main plot. Don't write such a big framework. I hope that the author will write better and better in the future.
The puppy won! I have to laugh when I dream, hahahahahaha
Alright, alright, alright
""Chu Weili" gave the author a big bug~ Wrong name
What is a lover?
Madam, are there any other extras in this book? Are you still writing it? [Kiss]
Wow, I finally waited for the extra episode! Happy New Year from the author!
When I saw the title, I thought it was Lu Yanxing's last wish, but I didn't expect it. . . . . Woooooooooooooo
Take good care of your health [pill], you look good, come on! [Spread flowers]
When will the new article be published?