A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: This Female Cultivator Is a Little Chilly

If I tell you my review, the author will probably be unhappy, but I really hope you can write it well. First of all, the protagonist's background is not explained at all at the beginning, and then the protagonist flirts with Han Li inexplicably (the part where he hears Han Li closely), which is really inexplicable and unexpected. Then he is about to teleport away with Han Li, and suddenly a world is not over, and he didn't mention half a word of it before. A Yuan Lang was caught and threatened her, and Yunlu Ancestor was written like a good guy with no temper at all. He watched the protagonist make trouble, and the protagonist's magic was incredible. He could resurrect from the dead, and could easily resurrect others. Hongfen was even more exaggerated, and was grateful to her for saving the skeleton, but wasn't the skeleton essentially killed by the protagonist? With Hong Fen's true temperament, it would be fine even if she didn't kill the protagonist, and I'm grateful. In addition, the protagonist's personality is very strange. He is cold at one moment and enthusiastic at the other, and his personality is very unstable. Then after reading dozens of chapters, the plot is very unsmooth and the reading is very unsmooth. The narrative is confusing and confusing... I really look forward to opening this article. I think the author may indeed need more encouragement, but I still recommend reopening this book and writing it again (I don't mean that the author doesn't write it well now, but it's just that the writing is really not good enough now). I really look forward to the author rewriting a good article. Come on.

If Gou Shen wants to go too, then Wang Chan won't even be able to sing out any cicada sounds 🐶

The descendants of the Guan clan in Tiannan suffered this disaster, but the clan in Luan Xinghai had the leader of Yuanying. Things are different and people are not the same, everything is over. If I want to speak, I will shed tears first 🤔

Recently, due to vacation and work, I really have no time to do anything🥹In addition, I also picked up the knitting yarn. After work, I sat there and started knitting, which was completely out of control. I adjusted it this week.

I'm so happy, this chapter is so good, the fighting is great, and the final twist is just like anime, a stroke of genius.

Woohoo😭 Ming'an, those who love freedom the most and want to travel around, being locked up in that place day after day, finally see the sunshine again

This Wei Lichen is very reckless. It would be best if he didn't fight him. Gou Shen took action before he could finish asking questions😂

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, what kind of guests will there be [Let me be healthy]

Awesome, now we meet the boss [Okay]

Isn't the CP of the heroine Han Li?