[Tokyo Revengers] My Years as a Delinquent

After I take the test (Level 4) on December 16th, I will definitely come back and update 🐶, so stay tuned, everyone [definitely next time]

I feel that the heroine's character is not distinct enough. For example, the setting with the first force value has no special effect except emphasizing dimensionality reduction strikes. For example, the shuriken and other hidden weapon skills that are standard for everyone in Naruto are not reflected in the heroine's mid-range and long-range combat capabilities. Several times when someone he cares about is injured, he can eject small objects such as stones and coins to stop him, but he is obviously right next to him and can't stop him. Moreover, the heroine's own character logic is also relatively vague. For example, before, the heroine treated the characters equally, and her relationship with Shinichiro was just an ordinary friend. Then the episode where Shinichiro showed her liking for him after his death was quite sudden. Moreover, the heroine can become a top powerhouse in the ninja world where wars are frequent, and her heart should be extremely strong and determined. In her opinion, even if the battles of these bad guys are not trivial, they will not make her feel helpless. But her reaction after Shinichiro's death was a bit decadent, because the setting said that she was retired, so I subconsciously thought that she had read Qianfan, and even if she felt pain about Shinichiro's death, it would not have much impact on her already established character. However, from the information about Torako's future, it seems that she fell directly into the darkness because of Mikey and became a killer, so she does not have the immovable temperament of the old god who is retired. It seems as if the heroine has always been influenced by others, and she seems particularly marginalized and powerless at key points in her destiny. Moreover, the heroine's attitude towards the role is also rather hazy. If he cares about Mikey and Isana, he has been letting them fall into darkness. Even when he disciplines Isana, he only uses verbal words instead of using force to suppress them. If she advocates letting things go, then she is basically present at every turning point of major events, but at the same time, she allows things to develop until the very last step to prevent the situation from deteriorating. Then there is the fact that the heroine does not have her own main line or career line, or she does not have a clear goal for what she should do in the future, what she wants to do, and what she likes. Generally speaking, people have a general expectation of how they should live their lives in the future. For example, if they want to live a peaceful life, they will try their best to keep it calm; if they want to live a life as they please, they will let themselves release their nature to the maximum extent; if they want to live a leisure life, they will become a little lazy. But the heroine's life is more casual, she goes to the orphanage, goes to school, gets to know the plot characters, and gets involved in the plot. The plot of this book has always revolved around the original plot of the anime, which seems a bit thin and the heroine's self-will is not clear enough. The above are some small opinions. I just think this article is very inspiring and I can't help but say it. I hope it won't offend anyone.

Where Shinichiro just died, the funeral was written as a wedding. It almost made me laugh [crying with laughter]

Can anyone tell this Shiyou in Chapter 5? I don't know why I can't reply to her. I don't know why I haven't seen Baobao's comments, I'm very sorry. This article is about passion, and the characters are indeed written too thinly. As for weapons, I may need handy knives, which I will improve in the future. She is indeed relatively lazy and living in retirement. She herself is not that orderly and kind, and the fights between bad guys are basically trivial in her eyes, unless they are the kind that kill or injure people she knows, such as Emma and Shinichiro. In the chick plot, she was actually quite self-destructive in the previous world, fighting alone and so on. Shinichiro gave her warmth, but Shinichiro died too early. There was a feeling that she lost as soon as she realized it, and she kept beautifying it. Then the male protagonist was originally scheduled to be Isana, and Mikey was regarded as Shinichiro's stand-in. This part was quite twisted. I didn't write much about topics that didn't fit my relaxed mood. As for the personal line, I will think about it later, hehe. Finally, thank you for your comment.

Sex change is more interesting hehehe

"Wedding" is a big thorn in the side of the author~

Okay, sex change is interesting hhh

3 It feels like it will be very interesting

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Wow, a little red in a million, it must look great