Day N+1 of Competing with Mr. Bourbon for Part-Time Jobs

I can't bear to see this. The teacher's writing style is very passionate and attractive, but I don't know if it is due to the previous manuscripts. There are many bugs and there are already several inconsistencies. 1 Conan has appeared in the previous chapters, but why does Shinichi disappear in Dorobiga Amusement Park in this chapter? I'm so stupid [scared] 2 The copywriting and main text seem to be two articles. The heroine's martial arts and cooking skills are not amazing, and there is no sign of joining the organization at all. 3. Officer Sato saw the note with the name of the drink and blurted out the name of the black organization, which confused me again. I don't know if the author secretly set up Officer Sato to know, but there is no explanation. The reader can't tell whether it is a private installation or a bug. 4. The attitude of the people around the heroine towards Touko. Sonoko met Touko in junior high school, but there is a chapter in the middle about meeting Touko for the first time. Everyone was thinking about him when Touko left, but when Touko came back, Sonoko didn't know him anymore [covering face and laughing], including the clerk in the cafe, the same problem 5 There are other areas that are quite different from the original work and it is unclear whether they are private settings or bugs. For example, Xiaolan brought a lunch box made by Fei Yingli to high school. However, in the original work, the couple had long since separated and Fei Yingli's cooking skills were extremely poor. 6. The timeline of Touko's undercover work. After Touko had obtained the Bourbon codename, he still said that he was still investigating peripheral members to gain trust. Such an early stage of undercover work is so strange. Could it be that codenames are something that everyone has? The above is not meant to be deliberately carried out, because I really like the articles written by the teacher. I haven't read JJ and there are very few Toru that are so attractive to me. However, there are some places in the article that affect the perception, so I can't help but bring it up 🥺

Teacher, I see you are still labeling it Naruto. Could it be that the heroine is someone from the Naruto worldview? Or maybe the heroine is Chinese and first crossed over into Naruto and then into Mingori, and it seems that the heroine is someone who has never watched the anime.

Omg Why does Sato also know about the organization?

? There is a bug. Mariko has known Touko before, so why is this the first time in this chapter?

It's so sweet, but suddenly I thought about why my sister fell in love so early 🐶🌹

There is something wrong with you, Touko, when you are attracted to a girl in junior high school (pointing)

Mouri Kogoro and Fei Yingli should have separated by this time. I remember the original novel was written when Xiaolan was 7 years old?

It's so rare for Touko to be cool and cold 🐶

What kind of persona does Touko pretend to be now? Sometimes she is a gentle waiter, sometimes she is a cold detective. It feels a bit fragmented, but the writing is good and I still want to continue reading.

It's a bit strange, why would Touko, a person with a strong sense of responsibility and a deep love for the country, be disgusted with the heroine just because she unintentionally hindered the police investigation?