○ The heroine's characterization is a little old-fashioned and melodramatic, but the plot is fine
○ Written to relieve exam stress. Short chapters, very casual style (elementary-school-level writing), and OOC
○ I don't like the ending. She'll return to reality (if I manage to write that far)
The story of how a self-conscious, timid pomelo is influenced into becoming a "socially anxious" person.
(I've never written a character like this, so I might not be able to pull it off.)
"If I could, I'd like to be brave for him just once."
"He'll pay for someone else's crimes. I'll protect him and make sure nothing troubles him."
"I hope he can always live freely, safe and happy."
I'm Wen You, and I'm about to start lying.
Everyone is their own one and only.
(The little sister's echo.)
Theme: Love and peace
The author's writing is very beautiful, keep up the good work 💪
Well written, why not finish it [Purple Sugar] kswl