Myth: Opening a New Era

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This article seems not to be my own.

Regarding the copywriting: It is a bit too simple. I suggest the author revise it and add some content. After all, copywriting is the face of an article, and it is necessary to decorate the face. About the character: The protagonist is Yi Xiaochuan, who has lived for more than two thousand years after the mythical plot ended and was reborn and traveled through time again. Personally, I think it is quite interesting. The two thousand years of grudges and entanglements have ended in the battle in the imperial mausoleum. The surviving Yi Xiaochuan has only experienced the vicissitudes of life, lost his true love several times, and finally said goodbye to the lover who has been waiting for thousands of years. Such Yi Xiaochuan travels again and returns to the era when he met Lu Su and Yu Shu. What kind of story will develop this time? Said he was looking forward to it. Regarding some nitpicks: 1. The author probably used the third-person perspective of God, [Ogawa finally collapsed when he reached the 30th step. Haha, I can finally be relieved. Susu, Xiaoyue, Yushu, I'm here...] If it's a psychological activity, it's better for the author to mark it with symbols such as '' or []. Personally, I feel that the transition is a bit abrupt. 2. The author's Yi Xiaochuan does not reflect the vicissitudes of life, death, parting, joy and sorrow that he has lived for thousands of years. This crossing is just like Yi Xiaochuan's first crossing. It's not that this Yi Xiaochuan must frown in bitterness every day, or look at the sky and miss him, but Yi Xiaochuan's psychology and reactions in the article (such as traveling through time again, such as interacting with another time traveler) are not in line with the author's setting of him. The above are only my personal opinions. I am very happy that the poster found some of them useful and helpful to you. If you feel that my opinions are one-sided and arbitrary, please ignore them.