[The most terrifying thing in the world is that you saw something written by the author when he was 16 years old.
I still can't write copywriting. Please let me go/. (Playing golf)
My impression is that it is very sweet. The plot is also very simple. However, the time frame narrative is a bit montage (that's not how montage is used). The whole article has a strong sense of fragments, basically only describing useful scenes, and the descriptions of the scenes are very dense (it has not been changed now). After the revision, some plots were greatly deleted, so there were empty chapters, because they were too outlandish (kneel down and cry jpg.)
Purpose: Chasing the wind and chasing the moon without stopping