Is this love song a dance the two of them share, or are they simply dancing alone before a mirror...
Sorry, I don't have any plans to write Shen Ruyi's story yet. I'm sorry -_-|||
jolie, how could that be? I was thrilled! Last night I even showed your comment to a friend, saying it had been ages since I'd seen a comment like that. I was grinning for quite a while, ^_^
I'm delighted by all your suggestions and corrections. I read them over and over, then sit in front of the screen savoring them by myself.
Actually, I've wanted to write a lovable male lead for a very long time. But my writing skills are still too poor. When I show my work to friends, they say, “Why is the heroine like this?” Rather than make the heroine unlikable, I'd rather have the male lead be the one people dislike -_-|||
Maybe after a few more years of practice, I'll finally be able to write a man so lovable that there's no one like him anywhere in heaven or earth. Hehe.
P.S. I didn't want to take up too much space in that little corner, so I put my reply here instead. I hope you see it.
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If the dialogue was more normal, it would be a very good article. The author may be too influenced by Yi Shu. There is really no need to imitate her because she is in Hong Kong. If the dialogue of mainland people is a bit fake and normal, it would be better.
It is indeed a good article. The person who wrote it uses emotions, and the person who reads it can feel it. Thank you author! Excellent writing style! Looking forward to your other new posts!
It's really beautiful! They are so good together!
Why does the male protagonist have to wait until he loses something before trying to get it back? But it's not too stupid to know how to redeem yourself.
Good article, thank you so much
The guessing game is not fun. If you guess right, you are lucky. If you guess wrong, you will lose your happiness!
Not bad, but the male and female protagonists are not very active...
Leave a paw print! Still like a good ending
I'm a little dizzy. Do people have to guess between each other?
That's right, I like Ruyi the most~~ Didn't you say it all? The protagonist is there to tell the story, and No. 2 Is the one that people really like~ Although I don't like the male protagonist very much, procrastination is not my type, but happiness is the most important thing, and other things are ignored~! Ha ha! ~
If the dialogue was more normal, it would be a very good article. The author may be too influenced by Yi Shu. There is really no need to imitate her because she is in Hong Kong. If the dialogue of mainland people is a bit fake and normal, it would be better.
It is indeed a good article. The person who wrote it uses emotions, and the person who reads it can feel it. Thank you author! Excellent writing style! Looking forward to your other new posts!
It's really beautiful! They are so good together!
Why does the male protagonist have to wait until he loses something before trying to get it back? But it's not too stupid to know how to redeem yourself. Good article, thank you so much
The guessing game is not fun. If you guess right, you are lucky. If you guess wrong, you will lose your happiness!
Not bad, but the male and female protagonists are not very active...
Leave a paw print! Still like a good ending
I'm a little dizzy. Do people have to guess between each other?
That's right, I like Ruyi the most~~ Didn't you say it all? The protagonist is there to tell the story, and No. 2 Is the one that people really like~ Although I don't like the male protagonist very much, procrastination is not my type, but happiness is the most important thing, and other things are ignored~! Ha ha! ~
When will you come back?