After thinking about it, the writing is quite good, the plot is okay, but the language needs to be polished a little, for example, some redundant words should be removed?? Also, you need to pay attention to the punctuation marks, and there are some typos. [A small opinion, for reference only]
After a while, the writing is quite good, the plot is okay, but some of the language needs a little polishing.
After thinking about it, the writing is quite good, the plot is okay, but the language needs to be polished a little, for example, some redundant words should be removed?? Also, you need to pay attention to the punctuation marks, and there are some typos. [A small opinion, for reference only]
After a while, the writing is quite good, the plot is okay, but some of the language needs a little polishing.