The story takes place in a virtual space created by a fantasy sci-fi institute designed specifically for people in vegetative states. Players can earn more time by fighting monsters and completing missions issued by the System. They can also increase their own time by reading the game time of other players.
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So what, if your writing is not good, I can't change it. Anyway, we both wrote it together.
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And please hurry up and withdraw this message for me. If you send it like this, it will be easy for me to put myself in a position of public criticism!!!!
So what, if your writing is not good, I can't change it. Anyway, we both wrote it together.
Can you please stop messing with my manuscript? Sister, there are a lot of typos, okay?
Why did you add a bunch of commas? Your editor didn't add commas [split]