My next novel, After the Disasters End, is up for preorders. Please add it to your favorites!
This is a writing exercise, so don't overthink it. Here's the blurb:
After a car accident, Lin Ruo accidentally entered an infinite survival game and became a... NPC. Her daily job was to record players clearing instances.
Since she wasn't paid, she decided to slack off.
At the start of her first game instance:
Player: "Aren't you supposed to help us clear the instance?!"
Lin Ruo: "I'm only responsible for bringing you in, then taking you out after you die."
Player: "???"
After she gradually figured out the nature of her job:
Player: "Why are we fighting for our lives while they look like they're on vacation?"
Lin Ruo gave up: "Why don't you eliminate me? Then I can get off work early."
Player: "..."
----- My next novel, After the Disasters End, is up for preorders.
Lu Jia woke up one day in a ravaged world.
It had once been swept by all kinds of disasters. Now that they were over, everything was waiting to be rebuilt.
Alone in a strange world, Lu Jia wandered aimlessly among the refugees, when someone suddenly grabbed her and started making arrangements for her.
"This is your house!"
"This is your land!"
"Work hard, young person! Things will only get better from here!"
Lu Jia blinked at the extremely shabby thatched hut and the vast expanse of overgrown wasteland.
Was... was she rich now?
But this didn't seem quite right.
*
Someone in Lu Jia's family had ascended to immortality, and that ancestor had left them a family heirloom, a jade thumb ring that held a miniature world.
It had been passed down to her in this generation.
She'd gotten into the habit of stuffing things into the space whenever she could: food, clothes, everyday supplies, seeds...
Now, in this world where nothing was available, all of it came in handy.
Theme: Live happily every day
Has Xiao Linlin reached the maximum level of points in the game? Then I chose to return to reality, but the game deleted Xiao Linlin's memory and continued to use it as an NPC?
It's not bad to watch, but I always feel that there are still many places that can be developed
The writing style is bland and the ending is a bit hasty.
Although the dungeon is scary, players still don't seem to think that they will really die if the dungeon fails. The consequences of negative points are currently unclear, but players can upgrade to dungeon recorders and even make adjustments to the dungeon... Just like in-game testing.
My brain... The cpu is going to burn out
Nice, but too short
The ending was a bit unexpected, it felt like it was supposed to be a long story, and the villain's death was a bit rushed.
Thanks for the limited fee! It's really good to read. I haven't read many novels of this type before. It opens the door to a new world!
So cute hehehe, the ending of the text is so touching, I cried, the extra story is also very well written, all my doubts have been answered, the relationship between Xiao Ruo and Xiao Song is so cute and sweet, la la la la 😚😚[spread flowers][spread flowers]
Ah, it's over? It's not fun. Isn't there a plot in the front where the points can no longer be negative? There is also a plot outside the work area that is not unfolded. What a pity.
Has Xiao Linlin reached the maximum level of points in the game? Then I chose to return to reality, but the game deleted Xiao Linlin's memory and continued to use it as an NPC?
It's not bad to watch, but I always feel that there are still many places that can be developed
The writing style is bland and the ending is a bit hasty.
Although the dungeon is scary, players still don't seem to think that they will really die if the dungeon fails. The consequences of negative points are currently unclear, but players can upgrade to dungeon recorders and even make adjustments to the dungeon... Just like in-game testing.
My brain... The cpu is going to burn out
Nice, but too short
The ending was a bit unexpected, it felt like it was supposed to be a long story, and the villain's death was a bit rushed.
Thanks for the limited fee! It's really good to read. I haven't read many novels of this type before. It opens the door to a new world!
So cute hehehe, the ending of the text is so touching, I cried, the extra story is also very well written, all my doubts have been answered, the relationship between Xiao Ruo and Xiao Song is so cute and sweet, la la la la 😚😚[spread flowers][spread flowers]
Ah, it's over? It's not fun. Isn't there a plot in the front where the points can no longer be negative? There is also a plot outside the work area that is not unfolded. What a pity.