A Letter of Feelings

The starting point of the story is good. . . It can also express the feeling of youth. . . Hey, I've also written about this kind of thing, sending letters to express love. You can consider changing the entry point and the order of the narrative. For example, write a letter to open the spirit at the beginning and recall the first time you met Guo Then suddenly I knew that he was no longer here. . . Hmm, does it look like a love letter? Ho ho

I feel that this story is not creative enough, lacks novelty, and lacks the urge to watch. The beginning of the story must be attractive. The name of the article and the content of the copy are also important. I think, of course, the more people you write, the better, right? So come on!

The article is overall good. It is written so young, dreamy, and beautiful. But... (I'm sorry, Sister Mengmeng, please don't spit on me) The article is too long and wordy, which makes people lack the urge to read. Moreover, the plot is relatively bland, and the meaning the author wants to express has not penetrated into the plot. It is like the water and dough are not completely and fully kneaded together. Therefore, when readers read the entire article, they may not necessarily understand what the author wants to express. Haha, a lot of cold water is poured on it, Sister Mengmeng, don't mind.