There are fusu in the mountains and lotus flowers in the hills. If you don't see Zidu, you will see madness.
There are pine trees in the mountains and dragons in the sky. If you don't see Zi Chong, you will see a cunning boy.
Fusu is like the lush vegetation in spring, Fusu is like a small green tree...
Fusu, it would be great if you were born a woman.
The real strong ones are those who can survive in this troubled world. If you die, you will have nothing.
Love, what is that...
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Reader comments
Um... QY has no love, and QY has no love either
Didn't I finish this just to write the second part?
Because I was forced to disconnect from the Internet, I read the full text and jotted down my thoughts. The serial number is the chapter number.
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3. Where does the bird put its claws when flying? Does Xue Da know? How could anyone stand on the back of a claw. . It will be pinched to death. . = =
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4. It's still a matter of details. Famous swords in ancient and modern times, I only know that the length of the fish intestine sword is not more than two feet, and the average sword has three feet, which is the so-called three feet of autumn water. Then in ancient times, three feet was not one meter, but seven-eighths of a meter. How could a person sitting down lean his face on the back of his hand on the end of his sword? . Unless the sword is inserted very deep. .
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5. Girls. . . . . Let's capture him without mercy! "
The dungeon of Tingx Mountain. . . .
Wouldn't it be better to add a blank line or a dividing line between these two paragraphs?
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Afen's confession made people sweat. . To this day I still cannot admit the rationality of this scenario. . Why would a person reveal his innermost thoughts so easily? Especially someone who usually covers up well. . Regardless of whether the other party will be silenced soon, as long as he survives at this moment, there is a possibility that the secret will be leaked. . No one with any brain would express such deep inner words casually. . This is a kind of novice performance = =This is a kind of thunder.
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Konghou Yin. . The harp is a harp, how about playing the harp? Well, think about it. . Oh, maybe the harp harp is the introduction to harp harp music. . Or the accompaniment of konghou music? Something's still wrong. . . . . = =
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Decline, see decline = = Ci Lang was resentful, this was obviously the lovely heroine of our family. . Draw circles, draw circles. .
Sweat. . Why, why does Xiyin have to say something, why does Xiyin call herself "Yin'er Yin'er" = =. . OK. . So shaking. . Ah. . It's a child, forget it. . Don't care = =
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6. Ah, it turns out that Afen is ready for an uprising. . No wonder, no wonder.
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7. Decline--Looking at this name, the voice and smile of our heroine kept popping up in my mind. . Sweat
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Well, the time span is a bit big.
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The knife is a pale death, shuddering. There is a huge problem with the subject, predicate and object in this sentence.
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I need to learn more about the description of over-the-move scenarios. . It looks like everyone is terrible at martial arts. . It is very important to build momentum, whether it is momentum in content or momentum in writing style, or even if it fails, there must be momentum in terms of word count. . But it's not bad to write Xue Da like this, it's quite real. . But then again, there is even a river god. In such a magical and fantasy world, the weak description of martial arts is a bit disappointing~
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Continuing to agonize over the details, doesn't He Bo have a fish tail? How can he "ride" the waves? Uh. . Just nitpicking, don't pay attention to me = =
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The four weapons are the emperor and the seal. . Ah, strange phenomena, five great artifacts, the legend of Xuanyuan, the dead old ghost, the mad dragon, my dear Emei, Wushuang, Yuan'er, golden shadow, Bauhinia clothes, the miserable little hairpin, the transformed phoenix. . Green Dragon, Vermilion Bird, Vermilion Bird Divine Bow. . Ah, Dongling, my dear little Mo, the Suzaku Spirit Flame. . = =The above are purely thoughts about the past that can be recalled, please 54.
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8. Xiyin's reason for leaving Lingtaifeng. . Real Thunder - Actually, if you think about it, normal people would not care about this at this time. . Anyway, I couldn't figure it out. I just couldn't figure it out, so I squatted in the corner and drew circles. . I hate people cheating, I hate people cheating, and then after hearing the news about my biological parents, I turned around and ran away in anger, looking at the sky, thinking whatever weird things I thought. . Forget it, our protagonist is relatively fragile. .
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The most important point among the key points is that your attitude must be correct. You must not make class mistakes. You must not worship money. Is a beautiful sword inlaid with a bunch of gems and carved in all kinds of weird shapes a "magical and good sword"? There's something wrong with the logic. The point of a sword is its edge. Putting the cart before the horse is a huge mistake. .
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9. X It's really weird to have Aunt Mei's name. .
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Well, I understand, the "magical sword" is just the opinion of two children. . Yeah, got it
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10. The man helped him up. . . . . . . . Lips mumbling to themselves
The subject of this sentence is confusing. . Can't understand
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11. . I'm going to bed first, I'm so sleepy - Goodbye
Author, if your description of the warden's appearance and Skylark's mind continues to develop, you will soon be like that.
So looking forward to it. . Pick it, pick it~~~ Bang (Applause~~)
Don't be in a hurry~ Take your time~ Mimi supports you~ Give me flowers in bunches~~
I want to ask quietly, is this an online game about a female protagonist? Why doesn't it look like it?
Keep me in the manuscript box
Good writing, keep up the good work, I like NP articles, there are very few NP articles from Internet King, keep writing, I will support you. Author's reply:
Thank you for your support, I will work hard!
After reading the poster's post, I couldn't calm down for a long time. As I said: Big sounds are like sounds, elephants are like shapes. Now I finally understand what I lack, which is the author's persistent pursuit of truth and the author's sense of weight arising from the arduous practice of ideals. Facing the poster's post, I was so shocked that I could hardly move. The poster's generosity made me unable to help but read the poster again and again. Every time I read it, my admiration grew a few points. I always wondered whether there was some magic under its elegant appearance that could make people not know the taste of meat for three months, and make people feel the lingering sound that goes through the beams for three days. Sir, your writing is really good. The only thing I can do is to upvote this post.
Poor Kudo~TAT author's reply:
Someone from K8 once made the same sigh~
I found that I couldn't post a comment on the last chapter, so I was furious.
What a cute article! ><
Every time Chacha gets jealous, he yells: Damn it! Poof = =
Um... QY has no love, and QY has no love either
Didn't I finish this just to write the second part?
Because I was forced to disconnect from the Internet, I read the full text and jotted down my thoughts. The serial number is the chapter number. **** 3. Where does the bird put its claws when flying? Does Xue Da know? How could anyone stand on the back of a claw. . It will be pinched to death. . = = **** 4. It's still a matter of details. Famous swords in ancient and modern times, I only know that the length of the fish intestine sword is not more than two feet, and the average sword has three feet, which is the so-called three feet of autumn water. Then in ancient times, three feet was not one meter, but seven-eighths of a meter. How could a person sitting down lean his face on the back of his hand on the end of his sword? . Unless the sword is inserted very deep. . **** 5. Girls. . . . . Let's capture him without mercy! " The dungeon of Tingx Mountain. . . . Wouldn't it be better to add a blank line or a dividing line between these two paragraphs? **** Afen's confession made people sweat. . To this day I still cannot admit the rationality of this scenario. . Why would a person reveal his innermost thoughts so easily? Especially someone who usually covers up well. . Regardless of whether the other party will be silenced soon, as long as he survives at this moment, there is a possibility that the secret will be leaked. . No one with any brain would express such deep inner words casually. . This is a kind of novice performance = =This is a kind of thunder. **** Konghou Yin. . The harp is a harp, how about playing the harp? Well, think about it. . Oh, maybe the harp harp is the introduction to harp harp music. . Or the accompaniment of konghou music? Something's still wrong. . . . . = = **** Decline, see decline = = Ci Lang was resentful, this was obviously the lovely heroine of our family. . Draw circles, draw circles. . Sweat. . Why, why does Xiyin have to say something, why does Xiyin call herself "Yin'er Yin'er" = =. . OK. . So shaking. . Ah. . It's a child, forget it. . Don't care = = **** 6. Ah, it turns out that Afen is ready for an uprising. . No wonder, no wonder. **** 7. Decline--Looking at this name, the voice and smile of our heroine kept popping up in my mind. . Sweat **** Well, the time span is a bit big. **** The knife is a pale death, shuddering. There is a huge problem with the subject, predicate and object in this sentence. **** I need to learn more about the description of over-the-move scenarios. . It looks like everyone is terrible at martial arts. . It is very important to build momentum, whether it is momentum in content or momentum in writing style, or even if it fails, there must be momentum in terms of word count. . But it's not bad to write Xue Da like this, it's quite real. . But then again, there is even a river god. In such a magical and fantasy world, the weak description of martial arts is a bit disappointing~ **** Continuing to agonize over the details, doesn't He Bo have a fish tail? How can he "ride" the waves? Uh. . Just nitpicking, don't pay attention to me = = **** The four weapons are the emperor and the seal. . Ah, strange phenomena, five great artifacts, the legend of Xuanyuan, the dead old ghost, the mad dragon, my dear Emei, Wushuang, Yuan'er, golden shadow, Bauhinia clothes, the miserable little hairpin, the transformed phoenix. . Green Dragon, Vermilion Bird, Vermilion Bird Divine Bow. . Ah, Dongling, my dear little Mo, the Suzaku Spirit Flame. . = =The above are purely thoughts about the past that can be recalled, please 54. **** 8. Xiyin's reason for leaving Lingtaifeng. . Real Thunder - Actually, if you think about it, normal people would not care about this at this time. . Anyway, I couldn't figure it out. I just couldn't figure it out, so I squatted in the corner and drew circles. . I hate people cheating, I hate people cheating, and then after hearing the news about my biological parents, I turned around and ran away in anger, looking at the sky, thinking whatever weird things I thought. . Forget it, our protagonist is relatively fragile. . **** The most important point among the key points is that your attitude must be correct. You must not make class mistakes. You must not worship money. Is a beautiful sword inlaid with a bunch of gems and carved in all kinds of weird shapes a "magical and good sword"? There's something wrong with the logic. The point of a sword is its edge. Putting the cart before the horse is a huge mistake. . **** 9. X It's really weird to have Aunt Mei's name. . **** Well, I understand, the "magical sword" is just the opinion of two children. . Yeah, got it **** 10. The man helped him up. . . . . . . . Lips mumbling to themselves The subject of this sentence is confusing. . Can't understand **** 11. . I'm going to bed first, I'm so sleepy - Goodbye
Author, if your description of the warden's appearance and Skylark's mind continues to develop, you will soon be like that.
So looking forward to it. . Pick it, pick it~~~ Bang (Applause~~)
Don't be in a hurry~ Take your time~ Mimi supports you~ Give me flowers in bunches~~
I want to ask quietly, is this an online game about a female protagonist? Why doesn't it look like it?
Keep me in the manuscript box
Good writing, keep up the good work, I like NP articles, there are very few NP articles from Internet King, keep writing, I will support you. Author's reply: Thank you for your support, I will work hard!
After reading the poster's post, I couldn't calm down for a long time. As I said: Big sounds are like sounds, elephants are like shapes. Now I finally understand what I lack, which is the author's persistent pursuit of truth and the author's sense of weight arising from the arduous practice of ideals. Facing the poster's post, I was so shocked that I could hardly move. The poster's generosity made me unable to help but read the poster again and again. Every time I read it, my admiration grew a few points. I always wondered whether there was some magic under its elegant appearance that could make people not know the taste of meat for three months, and make people feel the lingering sound that goes through the beams for three days. Sir, your writing is really good. The only thing I can do is to upvote this post.
Poor Kudo~TAT author's reply: Someone from K8 once made the same sigh~
I found that I couldn't post a comment on the last chapter, so I was furious.
What a cute article! >< Every time Chacha gets jealous, he yells: Damn it! Poof = =