
[Football] Leaping Across the Pitch
【足球】飞跃绿茵
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 32k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
More by this author
In booklists 7
Competitive Football Stories (Letting These Sweet Buds Build Up)
Following an ongoing story is like growing a little sprout: you’re afraid it won’t grow up, and even more afraid it’ll die on you. (Sad.) Please support ongoing stories! There are AI-written stories on Jinjiang now, so everyone should be careful…
Football Stories: Log and Recommendations
A personal memo. Preferences: wish-fulfillment stories, no-romance stories, and stories without emotional baggage or gloomy self-torment. Will not read: playing dumb, male national-team football, or wholesome romance.
Football Fanfiction Roundup
Simulators, cute animals, technical skill, wild ideas
Picking and Choosing, Then Feasting on Soccer
BG/BL/no pairings/football otome games. A mixed bag of football stories. I won't praise everything blindly; these are just my personal opinions.
Football Fanfiction
A real mix, mostly BL, with some gen, BG, and GB.
Reading Lately
Things I've been interested in lately
Soccer Stories I’ve Read and Really Loved
Great writing: some are beautifully written, some literary, some fun...
Reader comments 43
Translated by Google Translate





































Random thoughts on some of the comments! This is my first time to write such a long review, which may cause some confusion. Please bear with me! After reading it, I always felt a little melancholy. It feels like the Italian sun (I know the sun is very strong, but let's imagine a mild winter sun) shines on the trees, and the leaves rustle in the wind, casting faint shadows on the grass. You look at this shadow and fall into a strange reverie. The protagonist Colombo is like a gentle shadow under the sun, existing in every corner of this story. When you read it, you may feel that the protagonist is him, but not like him. He is a participant: gaining friendship with them, feeling anxious and worried for them; he is also like a witness: witnessing a story that is not very far away but seems like a lifetime ago. So there will always be some light melancholy; in this article, everything is light, there is no need for strong emotions, just lingering. In fact, I think the same is true for the famous Venice incident. In fact, there was no outside involvement and it should have been peaceful in the end. But there is no maybe. Different authors have different starting points for writing football articles. Therefore, readers will gain different feelings when watching different footballs. The biggest feeling I got from this football article is - tranquility. It's as if the author is a director of literary films, using her lens to show us a beautiful picture that didn't exist more than 20 years ago. I think this is a very unique style. Of course, I think there will be some changes in the Milan chapter due to the addition of the emotional line. In fact, judging from what the author has to say, the author seems to be somewhat unconfident about his writing style. But it actually reads very coherently. There is no need to insist on perfection, because imperfection is eternal. And who says that this prose style is not suitable for describing that long-standing story? Because even if the story was grand and enthusiastic back then, now it is actually more like the film left in an old camera - the fireworks are still grand, but they are also blurry, as if there is a layer between them. Many football articles are too imaginative, which makes people unable to have that sense of reality. But a very interesting point of this article is that although the article describes a heartthrob, we did not feel any disgust when reading it: because the author's focus is not on describing how special he is, and therefore how special care he attracts, but precisely because everything happened just right. So to be honest, this is why I said this article is more like a prose style - Colombo is actually more like the flow of "my" (the author and the reader) thoughts. This may also be why the author said that he felt that his character's growth setting was not too clear. I think this is indeed the case, because the author's article is more like a movie, and in this movie it is not a movie that revolves around the protagonist's growth. So my wife can think about how to coordinate. It is now 22:43 in the evening of August 25, 2023, and I am finally coming to an end after typing for a long time. But good articles can only take so long to type! In the end, Mrs. Hope's real life is on the right track after going through some troubles. The real hero is one who still loves life after recognizing the essence of life! In fact, I am also struggling with my academic paper (which I wrote so poorly), and I am very anxious about preparing for an internship and job search in the second half of the year. But sigh, tomorrow is another day full of hope! I hope the author can also be happy and return to this article as soon as possible to start a new journey of updating Milan! Very much looking forward to the description in Milan! Okay, that's it for today's review! A big kiss to the author and to the friends who also love this article! See you next time! (Crying) I hope the next meeting will come soon!
I like Colombo so much... I've read it four times... Woohoo. Nesta even started to be jealous of Milan Chapter (Crawling around humbly) (Can't find Colombo) (Crying silently) (Flying out of the earth)
All of you Juventus tridents have kissed you, right? (Pointing) And Gigi, where are the beauties, you are there! (Pointing)
What do you want Gemini? Isn't the Big Triangle delicious? ! Is there a more stable structure in the world than a triangle? No! ! !
What a gentle brushwork!!! A kind of poetic prose and water-like peace and sadness are spread between the lines, slowly describing the feeling of the old days to others!!! Love it, love it, come on (づ ̄3 ̄)づ
I have been very busy these two days since joining the company, and the dormitory is unimaginably poor. I wanted to update it last weekend, but I went home and lay there for a day, really not wanting to move. This Friday I don't know if I can put things to an end temporarily and take the time to update. I haven't played games or read novels in the past two days. I occasionally open the app and don't know what to read. I occasionally come to the comment area to take a stroll. I also want to write a novel. Woohoo.
Well written. Madam, thank you for writing this article. I read it all night long. After pdp joined the protagonist, it was like a stabilizer. When the mood was the most uncomfortable, someone would hold the fallen person together. It was really a beautiful dream and it repaired the regrets. The protagonist's meekness and introversion remind me of Mei. It's because of these qualities that I'm attracted to Mei and I like people like this. The protagonist is clean, good, and gentle, just like the moonlight. Thank you to my wife for creating such a good character who is so reassuring and lovable. I'm also looking forward to the AC Milan chapter, I like Xiao Sang.
Madam - where is our Xiao Sang - where is our Milan - I miss you so much, madam -
I like it so much! ! ! The writing is really great, the writing style is yyds! ! ! I just love this kind of Bianconeri. Alas, the scene between Alessa and Master Jiu was like a dream in Yangzhou after ten years. Colombo feels very warm! ! ! The time I comforted Alessa with Master Jiu didn't look fake... Help, I wish there was a little baby in reality who could be the glue for the three of us, and we would always shine together and cry.
The prank shows in Italy used to be super funny, and your wife could go to Du Niang to search them out! I remember one where the hotel proprietress teased Totti.