Everyone was worried about Ye Lan's political marriage, except her brother, who happily volunteered to send her off himself.
Her husband-to-be was as elegant and otherworldly as his name suggested. She fell in love at first sight, but the political benefits behind the marriage made her unwilling to accept it.
Though she was unwilling, she was powerless to change things. From then on, she could only focus on living her own life. Nothing else mattered.
She never expected her husband to accept her coldness and little temper without complaint, and to be so attentive and accommodating whenever she asked for something.
Until one day, she discovered that he practiced the same sword style as her brother...
There had to be a secret between them!
Content Warnings:
1. The main couple are each other's only partners. They fall in love at first sight and are mutually in love without realizing it. Things get angsty in the middle, but the ending is very sweet.
2. Secondary couple one: The woman has experience, while the man does not. He pursues her, but she repeatedly turns him down because of their difference in status. She dies for him, and he spends the rest of his life alone, holding on to her memory.
3. Secondary couple two: Childhood sweethearts. They secretly sleep together and conceive before marriage. The man dies in an accident, and the woman remarries while pregnant, eventually finding a good husband.
Theme: Life is made up of countless unexpected encounters
Well, the author wrote it very well, but um... ... I personally feel that you can change the terms of 🥺 things like this: for example, the heroine Ye Lan, you can change it to this little princess, daughter's family, beauty, that person, her, woman... This kind of thing, otherwise I always feel that there is a little lack of sense of substitution. Maybe this is just me. It can also enrich the article and reduce repetition. Plot description and psychological portrayal of characters are also fine, um... Let's add a few more vignettes from life... Start with more details, so that the characters can be portrayed more delicately and the image can be more concrete... When writing a text, you should have a sense of involvement. When you have a picture in your mind, inspiration often comes, and this is when you can best write. That's the feeling the characters give me... Not very lively, but still a bit superficial... 🥺 🥺 They are all writers. I am optimistic about you. Come on 💪 💪 💪 💪
Hello, I came here from xhs to read the article. In fact, I personally feel that the writing style is quite good, and it is completely sufficient for writing ancient Chinese online articles. I hope there will be more interesting and vivid plots to enrich the story line. So far, I feel like the character has not yet established itself. Looking forward to the new chapter 💪
Hello, I read the article from xhs. The biggest advantage is that it is very detailed. You can see that the characters' minor turns are well written and classical, and the world is also laid out and exaggerated. Next, I will talk about a few unpleasant points, please share my encouragement. First, I actually think it is a good thing to use dialogue to convey information, but first the characters must stand firm. In the first three chapters, the main point of view must have an overwhelming amount of information. What is her personality, whether her speech is humorous or mean, the heroine's point of view must at least explain her memory points, and the same is true for other characters. It needs to be designed with something iconic. Moreover, it is obvious that Da Da is filling in the content of his own outline, and the perspective switching is flying, and the obvious eye of God will distract the reader's attention from the heroine. Secondly, the writing style is definitely enough for writing online articles. The pursuit of classical taste is a bit too much, but in fact, if the writing is smooth and the readers are engaged, it doesn't matter. Just simplify the wording and focus on one or two key points in a scene. But what is really needed is to increase the readability of the passage. Since the perspective of the heroine is chosen, she must have big and small conflicts that urgently need to be resolved at this stage. Don't be afraid to vilify the protagonist and boldly give her emotions, because to evaluate a person is based on what she does, not what she thinks. Moreover, it is obvious that the heroine is blurred by DaDa's God's perspective. She cannot be omniscient and expose her pain to the readers. Otherwise, what I see is DaDa, a storyteller, not a novel. Thirdly, this is a point for beginners. Every time a character appears, his relationship and interest entanglements are immediately introduced. This is not what the first three chapters should tell the readers, or let the readers understand what they have done. Keep the hooks in mind and don't make the readers think too stupid and tell them all at once. Fourthly, this one is more personal, Leng Yichen, Taikouzao. When I click on the introduction, it will directly shock me. The extent of closing the book and abandoning the article is no less lethal than the heroine's name with overlapping words such as "cute", "soft", "mian" and "jiaojiao". Twenty years ago, the cold-faced prince and the pretty princess, and the iceberg prince fell in love with me. There is no violation in being here. Generally speaking, a niche surname can be paired with a non-uncommon character that has a good meaning. A common surname can be paired with some uncommon characters that are not commonly used in names, or use dictionaries, but don't go overboard. That's probably it, please write it down.
Ah? What a bland article
Ah? What a bland article