The Secondhand Planet's Top Broker [Interstellar]

I can read this in one breath, which means the writing is very good, but I still can't help but say that the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is too abrupt! It feels like we just met, the male protagonist has a crush on the female protagonist, and then he asks the female protagonist out, and then they go both ways! And the ending, it felt very simple and ended smoothly! It feels like there are still a lot of climaxes that should have been written. Xiao Zheng's father valued the heroine's genes and thought he could marry him. Then, there was no more. He participated in a variety show and the live broadcast became popular. It was originally a very exciting part of the story, but it felt like it was just brushed aside. The hero's parents were always in the background. What is the role of Ophia? Overall, it's quite relaxing, but it's not exciting enough. The background description is quite deep, and it's all mentioned in one stroke. The emotions are abrupt and there are no highlights.

The plot jumps are not very good and a bit incoherent. A sudden emotional turn Conflicts are generally written, and the final boss is offline in a very ordinary way. But as a first book, it's already very good~ The future is promising!

Like! ! Such a short story, the ending is a bit hasty but leaves a lot of blank space, and it has a very happy and Chinese ending. Who can refuse to tell a simple, relaxing and satisfying story after busy work and study? I can't anyway. The emotional line is there but not greasy, and it's not overly sweet. It just comes naturally, a little fast but acceptable. The most important thing is that it is very funny and relaxing. 88 Is also very cute. I like this robot with a strange brain circuit the most in the whole article (the one who impressed me the most is the artist who gave up his identity as a human being and became a swimming pool cleaning machine. It is so interesting). After reading it, I don't feel sad and empty. It is very relaxing. Hahahahaha. I like it.

I think the subject matter is novel and the writing is very good, but there are still many pitfalls that have not been filled in. What about the follow-up of the laboratory? How did the Gu family handle it? The emotional drama between the male and female protagonists develops too fast. . .

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival to all my darlings!

Congratulations on the completion! I am attracted by this novel subject matter. In fact, I prefer to read the story of selling balls (rural revitalization yyds). The description of the main plot is relatively vague, but it is really good as a first book! (Also, the love line needs to continue to work hard hahahaha) Keep working hard, big brother!

The solution is a bit interesting. To destroy an industry is not necessarily to expose it, but to promote negative publicity about the industry's shortcomings.

It ended abruptly, it ended so suddenly

The most interesting parts should be buying a house and live broadcasting planet ecology, but unfortunately I didn't write about it in detail.

I feel like there's still a lot more to write about