I want to see you! I really want to see you one more time!
In his previous life, Ling Yun broke through to become an ordinary eighth-rank Legendary Beast Tamer at the age of 28. He had contracts with seven pets and became the de facto guardian of Hanjiang City. He later died fighting invaders from another world.
But his pets miraculously returned to the past and renewed their contracts with him. Every time Ling Yun's beast-taming space reaches a new level, one of his pets suddenly appears before him. The strange thing is, although it's their first time meeting, they seem to know him well.
Every one of his pets is clingy, following him wherever he goes. It gives him quite a headache.
So people on the street see this amazing sight: a boy in a T-shirt and baseball cap, with a white cat perched on his head, a brown rabbit in his arms, and a scarlet little bird on his shoulder. Walking beside him is a young man with blue hair and blue eyes, so exquisitely handsome he seems otherworldly. The boy strolls down the street with them, completely unconcerned about the stares.
Theme: I have never regretted meeting you all!
Tao Baobao: On the white-eyed tiger that I rescued and even hurt my mother's number plate
There are too many exclamation marks, which greatly affects the viewing experience. Even three exclamation marks are described in a soft voice. I can't stand it until I turn to the third chapter.
Ling Yun is an ordinary beast master, but his experience is extraordinary. The high-level pet beasts that others had to work hard to bind became extremely easy for him. Whenever his level of beast control reaches a certain level, those high-level pet beasts that he wants will come to his door automatically and spontaneously, and they will not leave him, and they will bind him to a life-or-death contract. When asked why this happened, Ling Yun sighed in distress: "I don't know either!" Therefore, people often see this scene: a handsome young man, wearing a simple T-shirt and a peaked cap, yes, very ordinary dress, nothing noteworthy. However, with an elegant white cat on his head, a brown rabbit in his arms, a fiery red bird hanging on his shoulder, and a young man with blue hair and blue eyes following him, he was just swaggering through the market calmly. "Isn't it just that if you raise too many animals, you make some weird friends?" "If you think so, you are totally wrong. Those animals, including the young man with blue hair and blue eyes, are high-level pet beasts. They will only appear around those big people, and even one of them will be held up by others. Now, they are brought out like this by a young man. I am afraid that this young man is some kind of hidden master." The man looked like he had seen through everything, but he didn't know that Ling Yun was accustomed to all this. It was only later that he learned that in his previous life, he was an eighth-level legendary beast master and a hero who protected Hanjiang City. He fought to protect thousands of people and lost his precious life as a result. However, if you ask Ling Yun if you would do it again if it happened again, he would definitely tell you yes. If it happened again, he would still make such a choice.
Madam, are you from Qidian? I also have a reader account there. Your article gives me the feeling of Qidian's beast-control novel.
This introduction, have you ever heard of Chongmei? Although Chongmei is old, it is a book of summoning gods. How come your imagination is exactly the same as that of a human being? . .
I haven't read much of it, but the writing is average, exclamation points are used as periods, and the dialogue is a little childish.
Use less exclamation points as punctuation marks. It looks very tiring.
I feel like the character's personality is a bit strange, and his actions feel disconnected. I can't distort the character just to advance the plot.
Wow, are you really not waiting for other schools to recruit people? I looked at the level, and purple is not low, at least I will compare it in the article.
To be honest, your first few chapters looked like they were written by another person compared to the current ones. The beginning was a little more rigorous, but now it's like a collection of elementary school students, with weird characters.