"We met when we were young, and our feelings were impossible to suppress. We lost our souls and scattered like ashes."
A heroine with half her face disfigured x a puppy-like hero
The heroine is a little insecure, softhearted, and kind.
The hero puts love above all else, an innocent and devoted ferocious puppy.
A fantasy anthology, not scary, about the lingering attachments people carry in the mortal world.
Theme: People should not be divided into high and low status. Everyone is unique and precious.
Dear customer, after reading this chapter, the store manager plans to stop temporarily and talk about his feelings about the love line. This article may be a sharp and long-winded critical review. Of course, different people have different views on relationships. What I think is sweet may not be sweet in the eyes of other readers, and what I think is shortcomings may be super sweet in the eyes of other readers. This is just my feeling after reading it. (Poke hand)?(=?ω`=) Overall, the store manager feels that the emotional line of this article has a lot of room for improvement. 1. Lack of ambiguity. For someone like the heroine, who has low self-esteem and lacks love, my expectation lies in her constant self-denial, her habituation to injustice (her habit is often caused by the heartache caused by the male protagonist's eyes), and she feels "I am not worthy" of the kindness given to her by others. She carefully stretches out her tentacles and retracts the moment she touches the male protagonist's outstretched hand - in this way, she can achieve a sweet and sour feeling of pulling, and only when she finally establishes a sense of security can the reader feel complete. What this article makes me feel is: How did these two people get together in the first place? The male protagonist quickly called the female protagonist "Xiaoyu" instead of "Wanlingyu", not "Lingyu", not "you", and the female protagonist actually quickly started calling the male protagonist "puppy" in her heart. I'm thinking, would a female protagonist who has low self-esteem and puts herself in a low position call the male protagonist "puppy"? What's more, the two of them were not familiar with each other at the beginning. For the heroine, this marriage is considered a high-profile one. The hero's status is above her. Even if he is a fool, even if the hero shows affection for her, will she really communicate with him so smoothly and freely? (The communication between the two has been very natural since the wedding day) Including the male protagonist nuzzling, sticking, touching, and sucking his fingers (?) From time to time, which made me feel that the distance between the two was too close. It is true that the novel does write that the heroine sometimes thinks of the evil done to her by her family, but except for the fact that the heroine always feels inferior to her own appearance, I have not discovered how the heroine's other words, deeds, and daily behaviors are affected by her family of origin - that is to say, she fully accepts the good things the hero gives her without thinking "I don't deserve it" or "He gives too much and I can't bear it" (and this is exactly the design that makes readers sad). Precisely because of the lack of ambiguity, the most exciting part in my eyes turned out to be the heroine's reaction on the wedding day, rather than the sprinkling of sugar from time to time afterwards. 2. Let's talk about the impact of the male protagonist's image on the emotional line. To be honest, the image of the male protagonist was a blur in my mind at first. The copy says that the male protagonist is a "dumb and duplicitous 'idiot'." Although "idiot" is in quotation marks, since it is said to be a fool, it means that the male protagonist must act "silly" enough outside. Only if he "pretends to be a pig" is good enough, he will feel happy when he "eats the tiger" later on. At the same time, for the character with different appearances, "shrewd", "deep city" and "smart" are the other sides that go with "pretending to be a pig". However, I didn't feel that the male protagonist was stupid. Only the onlookers said, "Well, he is a fool." Do I believe it? What's more, the male protagonist's initial appearance was a very normal and decent appearance, even a bit boyishly handsome. Later, he gave me the impression of being more like a social terror who was not very good at talking at the beginning. At the same time, he doesn't feel "smart". I just feel that his force value is very strong. Maybe the male protagonist is designed to be a character who doesn't care about anything but his wife, but a male protagonist who only knows how to fight and only wants to be with his wife is not attractive to me. In addition, regarding the male protagonist's "cold nature". While watching, I always had a question: What attracted him to the heroine? What the male protagonist said to the female protagonist is similar to: I like you not because of your appearance, but because of your insides. So what is there "inside" the female protagonist that can attract the male protagonist - or in other words, what reasons can convince readers that the male protagonist must be the female protagonist? In the novel, my biggest feeling was that the heroine kept emphasizing her appearance. The "disfigurement of the heroine" impressed me so deeply that when I thought about what unique qualities the heroine had - I couldn't think of it? Brave? Kind? Clever? Strong? ——My feeling is that the heroine has a little bit of everything, but nothing is deeply rooted in people's hearts. From the following, it can be seen that the two met in the past life, which is why the male protagonist is so persistent and believes that "you are you and me loving you has nothing to do with what you become." However, the store manager did not see what happened between the two in the previous life. But even so, can it be said that the heroine in this life has benefited from the past life? Furthermore, the male protagonist has a cold nature. If a person with such a cold nature faces the only and rare person he likes, would he hold this person in his hand and hold him in his mouth like a puppy? If I were a person with a cold nature, I would not be able to distinguish between "love" and "possession", and I would use an extreme method to keep the heroine close to me. I would feel that "she is mine" instead of "I love my wife", instead of being an obedient child like now. Finally, there is a question. It seems that the male protagonist can always understand the mood of the female protagonist. If the female protagonist is sad, sad, or cares about her face, the male protagonist will notice it. So the heroine was uncomfortable facing Zhang's parents, why didn't the hero help the heroine to solve the problem? Or is it because the male protagonist feels that it's not a big deal for his parents to look down on the female protagonist? I have this question because later I saw Zhang's mother's attitude towards the heroine completely changed when she heard that she was pregnant - the hero seemed to have never responded to his mother? (From the beginning, when the heroine went to ask for tea on the first day of the wedding and Zhang's parents scolded her, the hero just took the heroine out and comforted her, but he didn't seem to say anything back to her parents. I don't know if I missed it.) Shouldn't he say something like "I love her whether she is pregnant or not, and you are not allowed to bully her"? Maybe the male protagonist feels that the existence of his parents (despite their harsh words) is not a threat, but if he helps the female protagonist vent her anger, at least the female protagonist will feel happy? 3. About spells. Maybe my wife wanted to be innovative in the article, so she added a copy of ghosts and gave the male protagonist and Bai Yueguang magic powers. In fact, it was a bit sudden for me, because after reading the first few chapters, I thought it was an ordinary world, but after the male protagonist gained magic, it seemed like it was turned on. 4. Originally the store manager thought this was a book "The Puppy's Rise in the New Year". But later on, I saw that the puppy did not give people the feeling of being "superior" and slowly edging out Bai Yueguang's position in the heroine's heart. Maybe this has something to do with the lack of ambiguity. The store manager felt that Puppy and Bai Yueguang had a feeling of "each in his own business" in Lingyu's heart. The above is how the store manager feels about the emotional line! In fact, I really like the descriptions of the horrifying scenes before the opening of each dungeon, especially what happened to His Majesty in the palace. I am looking forward to it! Come on, madam! Come on!
Puppy... Xiaoyu... Ah, I feel so distressed...
Madam, it's me again! Suddenly I realized something, would my previous long comment on the relationship line hurt my wife? (Erkang calls Yan Zishou) (because the evaluation is relatively negative ww) If the wife is in a bad mood because of this, the store manager will also be very sad, so don't take it personally!
Woohoo, Zhang Su—but the goddess didn't forget it subconsciously, right? I guess woohoo. Maybe there is some love, which may seem as plain as water on the surface, but is actually engraved in the bones and goes deep into the bone marrow...
From this point of view, Zhang Fuling's feelings for Xiaoyu are actually quite pure... Although it seems that to a certain extent, it is a bit pure and changed. It can only be said that it is really fate that makes people go round and round like this...
Although I had some expectations, after I guessed it was a puppy, I felt conflicted later on, but now I see that I guessed wrong, ah... Forget it - Zhang Fuling's attitude does feel strange. At least for now, I feel that he seems to be more inclined to a deformed "this should belong to me" emotion?
Guess a mulberry is actually a puppy? Puppy, why are you still wearing it? (Pointing and pointing. JPG
Speaking of which, whether it is a twisted emotion of "the suitor was 'snatched' by his younger brother and became his wife", or whether there was or is some real friendship, Zhang Fuling seems to have some affection for Xiaoyu (thinking)
She really likes the comfort of the puppy (?). It seems that he has never made false promises, but starts from the fundamentals and tells her: It doesn't matter, I will always love you.
Although but! Puppy, you are really boiling the frog in warm water - but you must be running in both directions! It must be!