I'm looking out in the crowd
Don't know where you are
It's like I'm hearing you now
But you feel so far
I don't know what I can do
I'm searching everywhere
That's why I lie here at night
And dream you to life
Dream you dream you
I try and stop
But I can't resist
Can't fight it
I fall asleep to the sweetest kiss
I wanna see you again
With his slightly oversized headphones on, Song Yan listened to "Dream You to Life" over and over, slowly recalling Su Qi's features.
He smiled faintly.
It could only be in a dream,
with you.
His everyday life was
unchanging.
What would the new tenant
look like?
Song Yan looked forward to finding out.
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Oh, that's all? Well then, let's celebrate again. At first, there might be very few readers, since there aren't many words yet and readers won't have enough. But as the word count increases and the plot unfolds, and conflicts arise, readers will naturally start to emerge. Please keep going, author! After all, if you don't persevere, you might never know that there are actually many people who enjoy your writing. Keep it up!
This chapter is written from Yuecheng's perspective, a common writing style in contemporary romance novels. However, I believe this approach is used to portray the characters' personalities from multiple angles and to develop the plot more comprehensively. Therefore, I'd like to offer the author a suggestion:
Hooray! This chapter is short, but it outlines all the essential plot points. For example, the man the protagonist has a crush on, the car accident (I guess that counts), and the upcoming new tenant. The plot itself is quite good. However, as the reader below pointed out, the author's language is somewhat awkward, and the word choice in some places is open to discussion.
Well, it's neither good nor bad, but there's no love in it. The literature on Jinjiang Literature City is very superficial. The title is good, but the opening is not impactful, meaning it's not attractive. Also, write more.
The spring rain drizzled down, each drop growing longer and longer [This sentence is illogical; how can raindrops grow longer? Rain threads can only grow long, but rain threads are drizzle]. Reaching out my hand, the raindrops grew larger and larger [If the rain threads are long, the raindrops can't be large].