I've Always Been Where You Can See Me When You Turn Around

Momo, why haven't you updated it??? I like Yangyang and Shuai Disu, but I think it's not suitable for classmate Xiao Lu to say "What should I do to you?" It's too rude, and it's not suitable for this unruly young man. I'm talking about the image of classmate Xiao Lu that I feel. I hope Xiao Lu is still so cool and narcissistic. To be honest, it's not suitable for him.

Hey... Update it...

Depressing... Not updated.

It's so lively here, I even posted it in my post, Mr. Amo, please go and see it. Shake it, I might hit it harder.

The comments are in my post, please check them out. Please forgive me if there is anything I said that is not in place~:)

An article I haven't seen for a long time suddenly came out in the library today, so I read it carefully from the beginning and felt a lot. Especially after reading too many campus articles about youth idols such as the so-called campus beauty and the invincible student union, I suddenly felt very comfortable when I saw such real words. It is true, but it is different from some campus love that makes people feel heartache: misunderstandings, partings, tears, heartbreak, love in the adult world is performed more wonderfully on campus. Maybe it looks better this way, but that is not a campus. What is there on campus? There are gossips, handsome guys, inexplicable conflicts between girls, and cute and worldly little girls like Wang Qian. You will smile when you look at it, because every sentence in it is what you may have said to others, every thought is what students may have, and every scene is what may have happened a few days ago. Therefore, I feel very warm and cute in my heart. It seems as if a farce in the dormitory is being staged before my eyes. The best thing created in the novel is its atmosphere. The campus love that takes place in this full campus atmosphere also seems very campus, not so strong and passionate, and some are just the little girls' self-confessed secret love and the confusion and troubles of unsatisfied male lovers. This reminds me of a comic that I liked very much before: the story of the boy and the girl, which is also a small fight between girls and boys, but it is a little more exaggerated in a comic style. I like the bickering between Wang Qian and A Yang the most, and I also like her silly monologues about random thoughts. I just like her confusion and panic when her emotions are chaotic. Anyway, this girl makes me think the girl next door is cute. As for A Yang, I don't think I like it too much (it seems like Most people like him better), it's not that he's not real enough, it's just that maybe he's not my type and I don't feel like it. But I had feelings for Luo Shi from the beginning. I originally hoped that he would be the male lead, but my hope was shattered. The two chapters of A Yang's confession were very interesting. I was originally guessing how the author would get them to get together, but I didn't expect it to be such a funny result. However, this chapter seems to be a foreshadowing. Is this what the emotional balloon refers to? Does it mean that there is still hope for my Luo Hao? But then again, although the confession can be handled in a more dramatic way, it does not mean that the relationship can be handled in a dramatic way. The author has made Wang Qian's feelings very clear in the first few chapters. It may not be easy to make a sudden transition, and there are a lot of subplots in it. It seems that a woman has just appeared. It is easy for the article to become complicated and lose the main clues. Please be careful when handling it. To be honest, the writing style of this article is not very good. It should be said that it is more ridiculing and humorous but not smooth and smooth. This may also be related to the age of the author when he first started writing this article: the beginning is obviously green, and there are several turns and changes in the writing style in the middle. Looking at the update time, the author wrote for a long time, and stopped for a long time in the middle. This is actually not a good thing for the article, at least for someone like me who reads it in one go. Then there is the lack of conciseness in the textual description. This is more obvious in the front. Too much ridicule dilutes the important atmosphere and causes the plot to be incoherent. The latter part is stronger but still has this problem. This may be the case when talking in school, but when narrating it in writing, you might as well make some choices to make the article more concise. Oh my god, I just wanted to write a few words of emotion, but I didn't expect to make a long comment. Haha, it's okay. In the era of bricks flying all over the sky, it is a kind of public morality to give some flowers. Don't laugh at me, maybe I really have some campus complex, and I will never be able to resist this kind of clean and refreshing campus article. Or maybe I am not just commenting on this article, but also commenting on the campus life that everyone has had, yours, and mine. Just now, a friend asked me what I was writing, and I recommended that she read this article. She read it briefly, and her evaluation was: it is not too fascinating, but a cute and clever article, and there is room for modification and improvement in structure. This is also the evaluation I want to give this article.

I was wandering around thinking about it, and then I slipped back and came back to write an article. Wow, so casual. Just like your name. Come on, update~~~It doesn't matter how slow it is, as long as you don't forget it, it'll be fine if you lose it.^0^

555555555. . . . Finally updated. . . . You know, I've been waiting for your update for a long time~~~TOT

Boss. Why hasn't it been updated yet?

Such a good article, but it's a big pitfall.