What should you do if you transmigrate to ancient times?
Zhao Wan: Thanks for asking. I'm in the Han dynasty, just transmigrated, working as a servant, treated like an ox or a horse and scolded every day. I just want to go home.
A sincere warning: Don't transmigrate! Don't transmigrate!! Don't transmigrate!!!
Wait!
My childhood sweetheart's real name is Wei Qing?
His older sister is Wei Zifu??
His nephew is Huo Qubing???
What kind of transmigration bonus package did I get?
Transmigration is crap (crossed out)! Transmigration is a pie falling from the sky! Thank you, heavens, for giving me a ton of golden pie!
Wait!
Wei Qing, why are you proposing to me? You're supposed to be the brother-in-law of Emperor Wu of Han!
Oh heavens, how did my butterfly wings flap away Wei Qing's emperor brother-in-law?
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Content Warnings:
1. The author is bad at writing blurbs, logic, and prose. No writing advice, please.
2. Slow burn, not historically rigorous, mindless wish fulfillment (that's a lie. It isn't satisfying at all).
3. I can't think of anything else. I have no outline and don't know what else needs a warning, so if you spot a landmine, run!
Theme: Those who help themselves are helped by heaven.
Looking forward to it, Wei Qing is my male idol. Compared to Huo Qubing, I prefer the reserved and wise Wei Qing.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why did your wife edit her essay! The previous style was also great! [Chigua] I like the previous heroine very much, she feels much more lively
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why did your wife edit her essay! The previous style was also great! [Chigua] I like the previous heroine very much, she feels much more lively
It feels weird after the change. It seems that the writing is too detailed and the details must be explained clearly in the first few chapters. It cannot be continued from the previous reading. My guess is that if I follow the previous version, I will simply explain my life without telling the life experience from the characters. Then the development of the outline will be biased towards the events that happened after the two people got to know each other. From the setbacks of the Zheng family, I helped Ah Qing reduce the impact of his father and the environment on him, and completed the early accumulation of knowledge. The two people formed a compatible outlook and emotional bond from childhood. Then the two separated, A Qing returned to Wei's family in his teens, and then established ambitions for his first career. From raising horses to fighting against the Huns, the heroine's pursuit and rising from oppression, and meeting A Qing again, the emotional development and like-minded spiritual world between the two, interspersed with the cultivation of Huo Qubing and their daily interactions with his family, and the process of dealing with political targets as Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty aged and the active thinking of those people brought them political targets. I don't quite understand my language and the meaning is not clear. I feel that my wife rewrote the beginning, causing the plot description in the outline to change the focus. Did she change her writing style?
Our sister Wan really has the heart of a teacher.
Eh? Is Awan older than Wei Qing?
Why are there only three chapters?
The introduction is fascinating! I hope the author can continue to update!!
This is a good beginning. There are really few stories with Wei Qing as the male protagonist.
This is very creative. Madam, please keep writing.