The Ancient Divine Bird

The setting is very good, but the whole thing feels rushed. () Many settings are not unfolded slowly, but are directly given to the reader through dialogue like narration.

The early stage is very interesting, but in the middle and later stages, the plot is as rushed as the Rockets, which is a bit disappointing.

This novel was written in such a hurry. The harmonious relationship between man and all things was finally brought up. There was not much preparation in the early stage, so it felt very rushed. The same goes for emotional scenes, which suddenly change from pet love to love. However, it is understandable considering that my wife was not in good health during the period when I was writing this article. Next time I'll take good care of myself before writing again! Ps: The emotional drama in an ideal town is really the pinnacle of my wife's work.

I feel like this article really didn't do a good job. I didn't bother to follow up after reading it halfway through. I just watched the finale because I was fattened up. I don't know how to describe it, but I just didn't think it was as good as the previous one. There is a feeling that the villains are all outrageous. The thunder is loud but the raindrops are small. The golden finger to attack this identity is too big. It is so big that it feels too smooth and invincible. All the designs of the villains are meaningless.

[Orange Candy] This book is so cute! ! ! I feel that the large size of the cyan wings is more suitable for writing about youthful, pure, late-awakening, less ambiguous soul-bonding cookies, and it doesn't even have to be about love! Many people criticize the awkwardness of the emotional lines written in DaDa. I think it's just the parts that DaDa is not good at. Look at how cute this one is and the one in "The Demon Lord Also Wants to Take a Vacation". Although I feel that the book just wants to write about falling in love, using its strengths and avoiding weaknesses will make the book more interesting, and it will also be more enjoyable if it does not describe falling in love. Readers will be able to fill in the blank parts🤤👍✨

After reading this, I felt that the author was about to finish, but I felt that it was still too early? ? ? QAQ must be cut down

I quite like it. It's been a while since I read a novel about the appearance of modern mythical beasts. I came here with high expectations. However, the plot of this novel is a little too fast and too many dialogues are mentioned in one stroke. It's a little regretful. I wish the author a better next book.

It always felt rushed, and the entire text was rushed. Although it looks good, it would be better if the rhythm was more steady.

The little chirp is so cute. I don't have much interest in birds at first, but after watching it, I really wanted to hear the sweet and sweet chirp!

I wish Chi Qiong Yun Xiguang will last forever [Rose] [Rose]