Also known as Mo Ran Yun Sheng
Xu Luomo transmigrated into a book about an obsessive, phoenix-like heroine and became the cat picked up by the heroine's master.
The master's name was Yun Sheng. She was stunningly beautiful and powerful, truly like a celestial maiden descended from the clouds. But she was so naive it was almost idiotic. The heroine not only stole her cultivation, but turned her into a demonic puppet, neither human nor ghost, cut off from reincarnation.
But Xu Luomo did not know that, in the original book, the little cat had dug out Yun Sheng's heart, trapping her soul in the demonic puppet and extinguishing the last of her life.
Xu Luomo refused to let Yun Sheng be harmed again, but the System stopped her: "Nope! We're here to keep the plot on track! If Yun Sheng doesn't die, how is the heroine supposed to become the Phoenix of Heaven?!"
Xu Luomo said, "Right, right, right," but in practice she cared for Yun Sheng in every way. She didn't like other people looking at Yun Sheng, but the way Yun Sheng looked at her was becoming more and more... strange?
Yun Sheng grew plumper and plumper. Her melon-seed face became a soft, round little pear, and she even stole many of the heroine's opportunities.
System: "What are you doing?!"
Xu Luomo: "The plumper Yun Sheng gets, the more the heroine steals from her. Get it?!"
System: Brain overloaded.jpg
Perhaps the Great Dao took pity on love and Yun Sheng's fate, and sent her through the tribulation of reincarnation.
But the cat had been stubborn and foolish in her previous life. Now she had awakened early, cultivated a human form, and stuck to Yun Sheng like a lovesick puppy.
Yun Sheng locked the little liar in a demonic realm, pierced her butterfly bones, and scattered her blood like lotus petals.
The cat in her previous life had been so heartless. Yun Sheng's heart ached, as if tormented every moment by the memories of that time, when she had never met Lady Meng.
The cat's black hair was disheveled, her weary eyes almond-shaped, but she refused to let her tears fall. She only kept leaning forward to kiss Yun Sheng, who slapped her in disgust
"Wretched beast, how dare you touch me?!"
The cat, who was afraid of pain, finally couldn't hold back and cried.
The new Demon Lord wielded the power of thunder, leading all the demons to attack the righteous path. Everywhere she went, the sea of blood was thick with corpses.
"Luomo, you know that world and that plot you wanted to protect? I'll destroy every last bit of them, okay?"
The beauty in the ice coffin did not respond. She only wore a cunning smile. Back then, the cat had pierced her heart with a sword, as if repaying Yun Sheng, but she had stolen even more
"Please, touch me again."
A proud, timid, pathetic little cat + X + a conflicted at first, then scheming and coldly unhinged master
Happy ending
Amateur writing.
The heroine is 20 when she transmigrates into the book.
Below is the blurb for my upcoming novel, After My Sanda-Practicing Online Friend and Mentor Skips Out on the Bill. It's an unconventional older-woman/younger-dog romance, absolutely worth adding to your favorites~ (Pretending to be reasonable) (Finger heart)
Bright, ambitious, sunny college student X deadpan, naturally gifted university sanda instructor.
Blurb:
Lu Nuan, an overachiever in her third year, was not only top of her class, but also a contracted illustrator.
Then disaster struck: the client who commissioned her art pretended to be a minor to skip out on the bill, costing her five hundred gold coins.
X-626: Master, let's take down this cyber beggar! It's our duty!
After sending her usual message to her online mentor, Lu Nuan downed half a bottle of erguotou, then kicked open the door to the sanda club:
"You piece of shit, bet you didn't expect your auntie to go to school here too! You skipped out on the bill and even dared to send me your photo. Pay up!"
The woman was tall and striking. A white bandage ran from the base of her thumb, looped around it, and ended between her teeth, damp with saliva.
"Holy crap! You're this beautiful and still pretended to be a minor? Have you no shame?!"
"Pay up! Uh... paying me back in kind works too..."
Lu Nuan let out a piercing shriek, raising the erguotou high and posing like the Statue of Liberty:
"Come on! Kiss me to death!"
The woman: "I'm not a piece of shit."
The woman: "What does 'paying you back in kind' mean?"
Lu Nuan: ?
The woman wasn't a piece of shit. She was a dummy.
After asking around, Lu Nuan learned that the woman was named Yun Liang. She worked at the university as a PE instructor and sanda club coach.
The person who skipped out on the bill was a cool woman like that!
A new overachiever surnamed Lu joined the sanda club, challenging people to one-on-one matches from day one. But Lu Nuan couldn't beat Yun Liang online, and she got pummelled in person too.
So every day, she made snide remarks to Yun Liang's face:
"Teacher Yun, look at that moon. Doesn't it look like the five hundred bucks you owe me?"
Yun Liang: "No."
"Teacher Yun, look at that wedding dress. Doesn't it look like the five hundred bucks you owe me?"
Yun Liang: "No."
Since meeting Yun Liang, Lu Nuan realized that she rarely messaged her mentor anymore
X-626: Master, I think I might be falling in love!
Yun Liang stared at the screen, expressionless as she typed:
Okay.
Chunhua Nursing Home.
An old woman set a curtain on fire. Luckily, the fire wasn't too big, and the fire safety system extinguished it.
When Lu Nuan rushed in, the room was full of choking smoke. A white-haired woman danced strangely, then dropped to her knees before her:
The volunteer's clothes were crumpled, water poured from the ceiling, and the world was raining
"Good girl, please leave Xiao Liang, okay?"
"Xiao Liang is different from you. Let her live, okay?"
"You know for sure by now, right? Let Xiao Liang go, okay?"
Theme: Good love makes you brave.
Hello, dear friends, please take a look at my pre-received articles. (Monkey holding a rose) (Make dog ears with your hands to look cute) "After Master, a Netizen Who Knows Sanda, Escapes from Singles", alternative sister dogs are welcome to collect it~ The highly motivated Little Suns' straight ball attack Crispy female college student X university Sanda teacher Lu Nuan, the junior scroll king, is not only first in his grade, but also a contracted painter. Unexpectedly, her painting was sold for five hundred gold coins by the artist who pretended to be a minor. X-626: Master, it is our duty to kill the cyber beggar alone! After sending the daily V letter to Master Shudong, Lu Nuan drank half a bottle of Erguotou and kicked him into the Sanda club: "You stinky bitch, you can't believe it, your aunt also goes to school here!! How dare you post a photo to avoid paying the bill and pay back the money——!" My sister is tall and tall. The white bandage stepped out of the tiger's mouth, wrapped around her thumb, and held the other end between her teeth, leaving wet marks. "Damn it! How shameless are you to pretend to be an underage even though you are so beautiful!" "Pay back the money! Well... Physical payment is fine..." Lu Nuan let out a sharp blast (Raising Erguotou high) (pretending to be the Statue of Liberty): "Come on! Is Lian Jiazi a great person? Kiss me to death!" Sister: "I'm not a smelly piece of shit." Sister: "What does flesh compensation mean?" Lu Nuan:? My sister is not a stinky piece of shit, my sister is a dork. Lu Nuan asked around and found out that her sister's name was Yunliang, and she worked as a physical education teacher and Sanda club coach at the school. It's this kind of cool sister who's running away from her bill! The Sanda Club has a new Rolling King surnamed Lu, and it's a one-on-one battle. But Lu Nuan not only can't be criticized online, but he's also beaten offline. So she carried a gun and a stick every day to fight against Yun Liang: "Teacher Yun, look at the moon, does it look like the five hundred yuan you owe me?" Yun Liang: "It doesn't look like that." "Teacher Yun, do you think this wedding dress looks like the five hundred yuan you owe me?" Yun Liang: "It doesn't look like that." Since meeting Yun Liang, Lu Nuan found that he rarely sent V letters to his master—— X-626: Master, I might fall in love! Yun Liang looked at the screen and typed expressionlessly: OK. Chunhua Nursing Home. The old man lit the curtains on fire. Fortunately, the fire was not big and was extinguished by the fire protection system. When Lu Nuan rushed in, the room was filled with choking smoke. The white-haired woman danced strangely and knelt down towards her: The volunteers' clothes were torn into wrinkles, the ceiling was sprinkling, and the world was raining—— "Good boy, please leave Xiaoliang, okay?" "Xiao Liang is different from you, let her live, okay?" "Are you sure now? Let Xiao Liang go, okay?"
I finally finished reading it, and I have to say that the author's writing is good, but the focus is a bit off. The span of a hundred years makes me feel like it is only a few months, and there are too many memories. Every time I watch it, I enter someone's life memories. The impression is actually not good. Some characters are good or bad. I don't really care about how miserable they are in the past, but there are too many words. To introduce those characters that I think are important but are not important, the plot started to become very abstract from the "Fushengjing". I felt dizzy while watching it, as if I was floating in the sky, trying to land but couldn't stand. Ten years passed by and a hundred years passed by, but these ten and hundred years seemed to be insignificant. It seemed like a few months, a few days, or even Later, I wondered if I had not left the mirror, because it was too unreal, but the time in the mirror was more real. In the end, what I wanted to see more was that Yunsheng could know all the truth, instead of forgiving Luo Mo from another world and Luo Mo from the previous life as one person. This feeling was as uncomfortable as a thorn in my heart. , Just like when you were wrongly accused of stealing money by your family but they chose to forgive you when you were a child, it is heartbreaking, and the ending is a bit hasty. The characters hurriedly entered and exited as if it was time for a performance, as if they were in a hurry. The whole story gave me the feeling of being on a stage. The curtains rise and fall, and the whole world is only the size of the stage.
Do you know that your writing has turned into a mess?
I guess she entered the game with her own body, replaced Yun Sheng's character, and suffered the fate that Yun Sheng deserved ()
Can you make a side story? Madam, woo woo The ending is actually a bit hard to reconcile. It was so uncomfortable to watch the two of them physically and mentally abusing each other. I wanted to eat something sweet.
The author's writing style is very good, just too good. Every detail is described very appropriately and vividly, but just because every detail is basically described very appropriately and there are a lot of rhetoric, it actually gives me a feeling that the focus is off track. Maybe it's because a wild boar like me can't eat fine chaff, so I was confused when I read the article. The overall structure of the story is pretty good
It was originally full of flaws, but I suddenly felt relieved after reading the last chapter. Fortunately, it was he, and the two of them were finally together happily [Xingxingyan]
I always feel that the author's writing is a bit messy, but I can't say where it is messed up. The plot is sad, but the result is good. It made me cry, and I lost all three packets of paper (ノДT)
I feel that this paragraph may be a bit extreme. Although the result is for Yunsheng, the harm is real, and this harm may be unnecessary? My personal suggestion is that if you remove the hand-cutting part and change it to other methods, or only hurt yourself, the effect may be better. After all, in my heart, Xu Luomo couldn't really hurt Yunsheng. Even if he did, the damage should be minimized and only achieve a sad effect. These are just some personal suggestions from readers, and the author can give them some comprehensive consideration.
Um, are you still updating? It is not a wise move to interrupt this article at such an important point.