I Became a Lord with the Sign-In System

Well, after reading it, how should I put it, it gave me a very strange feeling. He is particularly perfect in the places that I think should be defective, and also particularly defective in the places that I think should be perfect. During the period when the heroine became a lord, even every time there was a disaster, not a single person died. I think the heroine is immature in the early stage, and he should suffer some setbacks, but she is not as complete as he is. But at the end of the day he has a partner by his side. Some actually died due to accidents. That's what I think. Sometimes if you want to write something that is perfect, you should write it satisfactorily from beginning to end, instead of suddenly telling me later that so-and-so died. Then he said that in the future, God will have accidents and die, which made me feel like I was fed a mouthful of shit in the finale. To be honest, if we can't support such a big world view, we shouldn't write it. Just stay in this worldview. Don't write any more. If you continue to write, everything will collapse. You can just say that you just repelled those things, and then you protected the safety of the world. Don't write about how grand the outside world is, and how many gods there are. I really feel that these are just trying to make up the word count. Maybe the author just writes whatever comes to mind? But really, I feel like everything behind it is just a running account. The only thing I can think of is when I was building the territory earlier, I thought it was okay, but as time went on, I felt like there wasn't the ups and downs of the plot. It went so smoothly, so smoothly that I have nothing to say, but if it goes well, it goes well. I will read it as a cool article, but you can tell me about it later. His companions accompanied those around him to the upper world because it was extremely dangerous. My God, I really can't describe my feelings. In fact, I feel that starting from the middle point on Fang Yitian, I no longer understand why he had to be reincarnated. Maybe the author wanted to write a group portrait to increase his personal charm. But to be honest, I didn't feel any personal charm and even felt that this paragraph was unnecessary at all. Even the description of his collision with the previous lord was not very good. You just have to enjoy it from beginning to end. I don't want to click on it yet. If you suddenly give me a plot point, my mind will be running uncontrollably. To be honest, I can only look at the settings. The rest makes me feel like a brainless heartthrob. But I didn't write it well and failed. It's the kind of thing where you want to write about a heartthrob, but it gets in the way. In some part of your heart, you feel that being a millionaire is not enough, so you add something else to it. It gives people a very strange feeling. And to be honest, what I'm most looking forward to here is the bond between the Abyss clan. But the description of the voice family really doesn't hold up. Those Lords of the Abyss kneel down when they see the heroine. When they see the heroine, they say, you are my king. But the heroine feels that he has no sense of belonging to the Abyss clan. The author did not describe that feeling. There are really too many flaws. It was a failure of Shuangwen. It was both satisfying and unpleasant. In the end, it fed me a mouthful of shit. I didn't even think about reading it. Can't you keep me from thinking about it from beginning to end? The subordinates you arranged have arranged it. Can you arrange something good? It turns out that it is too dangerous to die in the upper world. How can I accept your reason? As long as you don't write about this plot, I will leave after reading it, and I won't post this comment.

Yoyoyo can also role play, are we also part of your little couple's play?

Ah! I had known better not to watch the extra chapter of the last chapter, so I suddenly felt a little sad. ≥≤

Well, it's still good to watch. After all, I personally like infrastructure novels, but this extra chapter is really a bit emo-y. No wonder many novel extra chapters stop at the happy ending. However, although the story about a strong female character also includes some group portraits, I think we can add a little extra about the reincarnation of friends, otherwise it would be really regretful. Although the reincarnation may not be the person herself, after all, there are no memories and emotions from the past. .

This episode is a mess. .

When writing a novel, don't write about life after the ending. Especially after all these years. . . A little uncomfortable. .

Finished spreading flowers! In fact, the ending of all the novels should be like this... So I can only stay at the happiest moment.

Not bad, but the later system has no sense of presence, and it is too powerful and loses a lot of the fun of infrastructure construction.

Pre-receipt: "Is the pub open today?" Tavern management in another world, welcome~~

Finished spreading flowers! Super cool!