The progress of each chapter is really fast. In other novels, these contents may take 100 chapters.
Such pure love! It feels like we've only held hands so far
The author's writing is good, but the scene transitions are really too much and too fast. Romance novels are usually read at a glance, but I often read this one several times and still can't figure out what's going on [changed]
The writing style is really unique and antique, lingering and pathos, with a lingering aftertaste, but it is too short. I still like the first twenty chapters the most, each chapter is heart-stirring, and then it is all the twists and turns and difficulties in the court, and there is a lot less emotion 🙏
Some of the sentences describing previous events are almost exactly the same. How about adjusting them?
""She has a restrained temperament, she treats me..." This is a big mistake for the author ~ "eldest sister", I missed a word
Tsk, tsk, tsk, it's really different when you're enlightened. If Bao Jiang hears this, he'll probably be so happy that he can't sleep.
"A few people met with Grandma Huang and then escorted..." This is a big bug for the author~ It should be "Grandma Cao"
Why don't you come to propose marriage openly? You just want to take Xu Yuanjiang as your concubine, but are you afraid that the Xu family won't agree? Or are you worried that taking concubines will hinder your inheritance?
The progress of each chapter is really fast. In other novels, these contents may take 100 chapters.
Such pure love! It feels like we've only held hands so far
The author's writing is good, but the scene transitions are really too much and too fast. Romance novels are usually read at a glance, but I often read this one several times and still can't figure out what's going on [changed]
The writing style is really unique and antique, lingering and pathos, with a lingering aftertaste, but it is too short. I still like the first twenty chapters the most, each chapter is heart-stirring, and then it is all the twists and turns and difficulties in the court, and there is a lot less emotion 🙏
Some of the sentences describing previous events are almost exactly the same. How about adjusting them?
""She has a restrained temperament, she treats me..." This is a big mistake for the author ~ "eldest sister", I missed a word
Tsk, tsk, tsk, it's really different when you're enlightened. If Bao Jiang hears this, he'll probably be so happy that he can't sleep.
"A few people met with Grandma Huang and then escorted..." This is a big bug for the author~ It should be "Grandma Cao"
Why don't you come to propose marriage openly? You just want to take Xu Yuanjiang as your concubine, but are you afraid that the Xu family won't agree? Or are you worried that taking concubines will hinder your inheritance?
It ended so quickly. Sprinkle flowers?.