I'm revising the story lately, mainly making small adjustments to the characters, foreshadowing, and plot holes. I'm replacing chapters as I go and have reached chapter eight. When I first started writing, Alhaitham hadn't even appeared yet, and I was a beginner too. My prose and word choices needed work. Now I can't stand reading the earlier chapters, so I'm fixing them all in one go. If you have time, you can check out the revised chapters, but it's fine if you don't.
Blurb:
Within the high walls built by reason, there is someone besides Alhaitham himself.
Alhaitham × original female protagonist Natalie.
Natalie is half Sumeruian, and lives on the outskirts of Sumeru. One ordinary afternoon, she knocked on the door of Lambad's Tavern and began an extraordinary life.
An inconsiderate boss, studies without funding, a ranch beset by problems, and a mystery about herself that grows ever more complicated... What unknown journeys lie ahead?
Genshin Impact otome story, one-on-one romance, happy ending.
Theme: Help more people eat better food for less money.
!!! Ah ah ah ah ah why stop here? Madam, when will you come back? Woo hoo hoo. I really want to read the following content.
My thoughts on Alhaysen are very Alhaysenhhh I really like this kind of wise man's thinking about the changes in his own feelings, and the feeling of falling into reason.
This doctor is so gentle
Poultry, animal meat, mushrooms
Ever since I played this game, my eyes have been fixed on the rough stones and I can't move away when I encounter the theme of stone gambling...
I don't quite understand why those businessmen feel that the identity of the heroine should not be revealed.
Damn it's over! Let's look at the update time again... Tears have flowed down. What else can I do? I jumped into the pit and squatted on my own (Crying Cat Head) This ambiguous feeling that seems to be there but not at all, this feeling of being close but not aware of my feelings, secretly but rationally pulling, this vague sense of daily life but with hidden mysteries, the ethereal immersion of the unknown future, and that damn blue-haired big brother who is suspected of being a doctor (die you!!) Xp poke! I just want to stay in the trap obediently, and of course it will be updated every other day, and it will be better and better every day. I am ecstatic!
Looking at it carefully now, although I can't tell whether there is any foreshadowing, it is very good-looking, and much better than the old Ford who mostly treated you as an otome (the bitter face is not intended to be displeasing). Is it because I am not fat? There are so few people and few comments.
Oh, Natalie is about to wake up (●—●)
I really like how two people get along Brother Hai will remember that Natalie's notebook is very important. Pay attention to it, and he will inadvertently discover how good she is. This really pokes me.