Gintama | Hijikata/Gintoki | Who Says Tomorrow Is the Last Day?

Search the keyword "Jintu" and click in. After reading the postscript, I left silently...

Haha, yes, wine is a good thing. Having sex after drinking or something like that... Are the two of them talking to each other?

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I first downloaded the e-book and read it. After reading Leopard, I had the urge to write a long review... I am self-aware and know that I cannot write any technical posts, so I might as well just share my views. The first is how this article makes me feel. As a fan of Gintama, it can be said that it is a bit lacking in comedy, that is, there are too few silenced plots in Gintama (forgive me, I just want to see it and facepalm~). As for the author talking about character collapse many times, I felt a little disappointed at first. I especially felt that Gin Sang was no longer Gin Sang and felt very innocent, and the uncle's lazy temperament was gone... But after I carefully read the dialogue and behavior of the characters several times, I felt that all this would indeed happen in the comics, which is quite fitting for the character (this person is confused...). As for the reason why the characters "seem" to be broken, I think it is not enough detailed descriptions. It would probably be better if portrait descriptions and action descriptions that fit them can be added to the emotional changes of the characters. Oops, although Tsuchin and Gin feel a little out of shape to me, the author is quite successful in shaping other supporting characters, especially Okita (so what is this called, talking too much will lead to mistakes? Sorry). Okita is so cute. The Okita in this article is exactly the same as the original! Therefore, the author, please be more confident, add appropriate descriptions, and save the slightly out-of-shape Dougin duo! Ahem, let's talk about the plot next~ I like to read articles with strong plots, so this article fits my tone very well, and I feel that the pace is good. As for some plots outside the main line, I don't agree with what the author himself calls "water" - the rhythm of an article should be ups and downs, so proper rest in tense plots is necessary. The author's arrangement of the plot is very good. So... Be more confident, author TAT. I almost want to cry when I see your unconfident look! Although the writing is still immature, I like your writing very much! I have decided to follow you. If you continue to be so unsure, I will really cry, bastard TAT! Let me calm down... How could a thousand-word review be so long... Then let's talk about the progress of Tu and Yin. Although I read the article mainly for the plot, and the love and other things are used as foils, but I still hope that the two of Tuyin can get together soon, because this is a story about Tuyin after all... I hope the author will not get excited after reading this and hastily bring the two of Tuyin together. After all, it is better for things like feelings to develop naturally (ok, I admit that I am a contradictory person = =)... As the saying goes, "It's a happy little story"... I will never trust the author again, bastard! At first I saw that Hijikata had brain cancer. When I was worried, I felt a lot relieved when you said "Don't worry, this is a happy little story." But now I am very worried, hey = =, I thought it was really a misunderstanding, but now I am desperate... Or is it really a misunderstanding? But at least now I'm worried! I hope this is really a "happy" story, hey (looking at the sky)! Anyway, here's some advice~ Since I'm a fan of Gintama, it's okay to be a bit exaggerated in the description. The author should work hard to carry forward the Gintama style (I didn't use the wrong word, did I?)! Well, I am optimistic about the author and hope to see your progress^^, Fight! So finally it's a thousand words… My first long review, I found it very hard OTZ

Hahaha~ Finally...(Laughing without saying a word)

It's very original, and the characters' personalities don't make you feel bad at all. In my eyes, Tuyin should be like this happy enemy who bickers and fights. Come on, author!

Well, I bought a book from the bookstore today. The name is "Gintama Fanjin: Who Said Tomorrow is the Last Day". The author is signed by Rotu, and the content is the same as this article... So I came here to ask, is that book an authorized and genuine version? Please reply! I feel unbalanced without getting the answer...

Ah, author, I want to say that this is my most beautiful Gintama fanfic! Haha, H or something, Hijikata or Gintoki Qiangqiang, that's how it is if they are really together. In fact, Gintama has too many loving CPs, even if it's Chika Katsura or something like that, I don't mind. But my cutest one is indeed the official match Gintu or Toki Gin, Oishin. Author, the extra is so loving! Starry eyes! Compared to the lustful flesh, Sure enough, love is what I like more. Compared to such sensational words, I really prefer the noisy and gibberish noises of such "bastards" and "idiots"! The shortcoming of this story is that it is really short! Resentment! Nai's postscript also expresses a lot of things that are on my mind! Nai always makes comments, but I don't feel that there is any point in it. ^_^ Thank you Nai for writing such a beautiful story!

Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, process... I feel so resentful!

This extra is so cute!!! Ah, "Just do it! I can afford the existence of this bastard in my life!" I was completely immersed in this confession (?) And couldn't extricate myself...