Born to Be an Ephemeral Flower

Like it very much. It's a pity that it's only one chapter. By the way, I have never been able to write short stories. I learned something from what I saw today.

It turns out there is a score, so I'll give it to you.

I'm looking forward to your long article, it feels very good.

Well, it looks good, but it's too short. I'm very greedy!

I just started writing short stories, and they're pretty good! I think the female protagonist's resentful and persistent feelings are expressed, while the male protagonist's expressiveness is a little weaker. Another point is that Veda's practice of Taoism and becoming a Buddha feel a bit contradictory. They all say "cultivate the Tao and become an immortal", but there is no such thing as "cultivate the Tao and become a Buddha". It will be better if you practice Buddhism and Zen. It's just a humble opinion, please forgive me if I'm wrong...

It's up to you. Come on. I know you can do it. Hehe.

Good. Support you, come on

Great article, keep up the good work!

Sincere feelings, true love is a matter between two people.

I came to see it~ It's great