The writing is very good, and it is different from what I usually read, but you wrote it with a depressing feeling. If you continue writing it, I think I might cry. Really well written
Not bad (≧▽≦)
Miji, Qiya, Aluka
I wrote what I really feel. I don't completely agree with Killua and the lady's actions.
In addition, I really like the eldest brother and Aluka in the article.
It's obviously a flowing narrative, but why do I feel so tragic?!
I think this version of the hunter is better.
I find it very interesting every time I see the blessings of my ancestors.
I like this article very much~~~~~ Author, will you continue to write?
After reading it, I suddenly felt that the model student was really sad and cute. Alas, I think back then I was one of thousands of model students, and I was the kind of model student with mediocre grades, the one who least attracted the teacher's attention. Now think about it, if I had worked harder, would I have more memories now? I don't know if Aluka felt this way, or at the moment of his death, he thought that ordinary people also have ordinary happiness.
What about Nanica? Why didn't you write it?
The writing is very good, and it is different from what I usually read, but you wrote it with a depressing feeling. If you continue writing it, I think I might cry. Really well written
Not bad (≧▽≦)
Miji, Qiya, Aluka
I wrote what I really feel. I don't completely agree with Killua and the lady's actions. In addition, I really like the eldest brother and Aluka in the article.
It's obviously a flowing narrative, but why do I feel so tragic?!
I think this version of the hunter is better.
I find it very interesting every time I see the blessings of my ancestors.
I like this article very much~~~~~ Author, will you continue to write?
After reading it, I suddenly felt that the model student was really sad and cute. Alas, I think back then I was one of thousands of model students, and I was the kind of model student with mediocre grades, the one who least attracted the teacher's attention. Now think about it, if I had worked harder, would I have more memories now? I don't know if Aluka felt this way, or at the moment of his death, he thought that ordinary people also have ordinary happiness.